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In some countries owning a own home is moremore important rather than renting a home

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forurard
. For Owning a
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thing For
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in the
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all
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members with
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as they can share a Significant
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j when I
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in hostel that time I missed
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own
home and when I had
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came
at home.
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could
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own
residence. In
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second reason that it gives Financial Stability. If you
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any
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Condition
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can
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apurtment
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excFinanci


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, they tension.

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apartment,
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Family and
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bond with they
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as depression can be
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easily
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home as
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a
investment. If they need money, they would to sell
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appartment
might be necessary things for
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residence lead happiness for
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IELTS essay In some countries owning a own home is moremore important rather than renting a home

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
307 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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