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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?

In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation? mMq8

Selecting place to live is most vital decision in humans life. In some some part of world, having own premises is most significant because it is senses of achievement than renting which could not save money. It has a many positive outcomes as house ownership is natural human desire. To commence with, After having everything in life a person want to live in his own house. At the same time, it gave many benefits also. Firstly, Individual have freedom at his/her home and can freely live life. In addition, in personal house people con renovate it and make changes according to their choices after several years. Due to this, they get Superior respect by their near ones or neighbour as well as they acquire great status and impression in Society too. Furthermore, a person can feel Satisfied and relaxed in private residence. Moreover, they also experience Sense of fulfillment. For instance When an individual Obtain an appropriate Job and earn sufficient money then he Started planning to his dream house in this way one can fulfill it. Thus, human kind also feel sense of Security at personal accommodation. However, it to also reduce the burden of paying monthly rentals that imposes additional stress on families that depends on renting houses. In conclusion, due of Safety & stability concern people tends to have their private assets instead of renting. By this way it is a positive development in favor of many people

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live
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most
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some
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own
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because
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many
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positive
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house
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live
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own
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house
. At the same time, it gave This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 benefits also
. Firstly
, Individual have freedom at his/her home and can freely
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live
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, in personal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
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people
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make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 according to their choices after several years. Due to this, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 Superior respect by their near ones or Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.neighbor
neighbour
as well
 as they acquire

great status and impression in Society too.

Furthermore
, a person can feel Satisfied and relaxed in private residence. Moreover
,

they also
 experience Sense of fulfillment. For instance
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an appropriate Job and earn sufficient money then he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
Started
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house
 in this way one can fulfill it. Thus
, human kind also
 feel sense of Security at personal accommodation. However
, it to also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the burden of paying monthly rentals that imposes additional This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 on families that depends on renting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
.

In conclusion
, due of Safety & stability concern This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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tends
 to have their private assets instead
 of renting. By this way it is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
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many
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people