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İn some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this he the case? Do you think this is a positive or negatıve situation?

It is important to have own house rather than renting one in some parts of the world’s population. From my point of view this is a negative situation that people think owning a house is better than renting one. It can be more suitable for people to rent a house. Because renting a house is cheaper than owning one. For instance, one wants to own a house, he needs to pay more money for owning and repairing some other problems of the house. It cost a lot of money than renting a house. As we are people we need some changes in our lives. If you own a house you should live in the same place and rooms which is very boring. On the other hand renting a house give us tremendous oppurtunities to move, to leave, to travel when we want. In the conclusion I disagree with the idea that renting house is worse than owning one.
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other problems of the
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IELTS essay İn some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this he the case? Do you think this is a positive or negatıve situation?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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