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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? 7ar9A
It is said that owning a home is more crucial than renting one in some nations. In my opinion, this thought potentially be a drawbacks for people. The reason why people believe it is more significant owning a house than simply renting one is that they tend to think buying a house is a high-return investment. Take for example, in Vancouver or Tronto, all people who bought a house a decade ago would earn a large amount of money if they sold it now. Hence, many focus on only success cases. In other words, people do not consider a risk of buying a house enough. For instance, there is a possibility of the market crash or nature disaster, which could damage the house, in the result, they will lose the value of it. Needless to say, this situation can be unbeneficial. Firstly, owning house costs a significant amout of money than people expect. For example, pipes, floor and walls, they will need a repair regularly. Therefore, people might suffer from unexpected cost for owning a house. Renting one, on the othert hand, can be more economical. People are easily able to move out if the house gets old as opposed to owning one. Thus, people need to know that owning house is not as good as they believe. In conclusion, there are significant risks for owning house than people believe. It is important to make a decision whether buying one or owning one while knowning the risk of both options.
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is said
that
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owning
a home is more crucial than renting one in
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some
nations. In my opinion, this
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thought
potentially
be
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a drawbacks
for
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people
.

The reason why
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people
believe it is more significant
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owning
a
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house
than
simply
renting one is that they tend to
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think
buying a
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house
is a high-return investment. Take
for example
, in Vancouver or
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Tronto
, all
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people
who
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bought
a
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house
a decade ago would earn a large amount of money if they sold it
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now
.
Hence
,
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many
focus on
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only
success cases.
In other words
,
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people
do not consider a
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risk
of buying a
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house
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enough
.
For instance
, there is a possibility of the market crash or nature disaster, which could damage the
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house
, in the result, they will lose the value of it.

Needless to say, this situation can be
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unbeneficial
.
Firstly
,
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owning
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house
costs a significant
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amout
of money than
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people
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expect
.
For example
, pipes, floor and walls, they will need a repair
regularly
.
Therefore
,
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people
might suffer from unexpected cost for
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owning
a
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house
. Renting one, on the
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othert
hand, can be more economical.
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People
are
easily
able to
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move
out if the
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house
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gets
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old
as opposed to
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owning
one.
Thus
,
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people
need to know that
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owning
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house
is not as
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good
as they believe.

In conclusion
, there are significant
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risks
for
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owning
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house
than
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people
believe. It is
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important
to
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make
a decision whether buying one or
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owning
one while
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knowning
the
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risk
of both options.
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IELTS essay In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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250 words
6.0
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