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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? v.4

In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? v. 4
Accommodation is a fundamental needs of an individual's life. In few regions many people like to lease their apartment instead of buying one. This essay will outline some conveniences to rent, house, although it has some inconveniences. Some landlords are just infuriating and fastidious to their house. First of all, they make few legislations to live in the apartment, but most of the time it's too solemn. And a number of unethical owners take the advantages of temporary rentals with exorbitant prices. For example, Dhaka is the capital of Bangladesh, where the cost of renting the room is just too expensive it is intolerable for the destitute. Moreover, some of them will reject you to hire a friend or having fun in your living room. These few instances can bolster the existing concept that those obstacles of fare cabin are sometime insufferable, though it has some positive sides. However, many cities are costly to purchase land for constructing a Villa it's easy to lease an apartment. First and foremost, you will not have to be agitated about making bills, tax, construction and many other things, it's the owner's responsibility. Also, if you are not intending to stay long time that would not happen to your financial budget. For instance, if an unstable resident buys abode in an unknown town, it would be difficult to sell out immediately he or she might have to obey a big cost. Notwithstanding, acquiring it is good to pay for living. In conclusion, this essay discussed the either aspect of a rented house. Instead of aquiring a palace paying service offers a lots of facilities. To infer, I'm convinced that in spite of some irrefutable difficulties it is usual to live in a payable dwelling place.
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many
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people
like to lease their apartment
instead
of buying one. This essay will outline
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some
conveniences to rent,
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house
, although it has
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some
inconveniences.

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Some
landlords are
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just
infuriating and fastidious to their
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house
.
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First of all
, they
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make
few
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legislations
to
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live
in the apartment,
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but
most of the time it's too solemn. And a number of unethical owners take the advantages of temporary rentals with exorbitant prices.
For example
, Dhaka is the capital of Bangladesh, where the cost of renting the room is
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just
too expensive it is intolerable for the destitute.
Moreover
,
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some
of them will reject you to hire a friend or having fun in your living room. These few instances can bolster the existing concept that those obstacles of fare cabin are sometime insufferable, though it has
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some
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positive
sides.

However
,
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many
cities are costly to
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purchase
land for constructing a Villa it's easy to lease an apartment.
First
and foremost, you will not
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have to
be agitated
about making bills, tax, construction and
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many
other things, it's the owner's responsibility.
Also
, if you are not intending to stay long time that would not happen to your financial budget.
For instance
, if an unstable resident
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buys
abode in an unknown town, it would be difficult to sell out immediately he or she might
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have to
obey a
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big
cost. Notwithstanding, acquiring it is
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good
to pay for living.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed the either aspect of a rented
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house
.
Instead
of
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aquiring
a palace paying service offers
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a lot" or simply "lots"?
a lots
of facilities. To infer, I'm convinced that
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in spite of
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some
irrefutable difficulties it is usual to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a payable dwelling place.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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