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In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting v.1

In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting v. 1
Whether to buy a property or to rent one, is always a debatable topic. While, most of the people are trending towards renting rather than owning a house. In this essay, I will try to discuss some of the advantages and disadvantages of renting. Renting a home is mostly cheaper than buying a home. There is a fixed amount which needs to be paid on a monthly basis instead of paying a hefty mortgage for purchasing a house. Furthermore, this lump sum amount will include all utilities paving way for some additional saving. Besides, all of the maintenance and small repairs are usually housed owner's responsibility, which gives a sense of relief to the tenant. Moreover, it gives more flexibility as most of the lease contracts are for 12 months, so if a job requires to move frequently then renting an accommodation is better than owning. However, this trend has some disadvantages as well. The house rent is not fixed as compared to the fixed mortgages. Rent amount is usually changed on a yearly basis. Besides, renting a house is considered to be a liability while owning a house is an asset. To sum it up, it is always a personal preference to either buy a house or rent a house depending upon the requirement and circumstances. The world is a global village and people are migrating from one place to another which increases the number of people opting for this option. Moreover, the benefits of renting outweighs than any of its drawbacks
Whether to
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buy
a property or to
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rent
one, is always a debatable topic.
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, most of the
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people
are trending towards
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renting
rather
than owning a
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house
. In this essay, I will try to discuss
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some of the
advantages and disadvantages of renting.

Renting a home is
mostly
cheaper than buying a home. There is a
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fixed
amount which needs to
be paid
on a monthly basis
instead
of paying a hefty mortgage for purchasing a
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house
.
Furthermore
, this lump sum amount will include all utilities paving way for
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some
additional saving.
Besides
,
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all of the
maintenance and
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small
repairs are
usually
housed owner's responsibility, which gives a sense of relief to the tenant.
Moreover
, it gives more flexibility as most of the lease contracts are for 12 months,
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so
if a job requires to
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move
frequently
then
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renting
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an accommodation
is better than owning.

However
, this trend has
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some
disadvantages
as well
. The
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house
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rent
is not
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fixed
as compared to the
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fixed
mortgages.
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Rent
amount is
usually
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changed
on a yearly basis.
Besides
,
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renting
a
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house
is considered
to be a liability while owning a
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house
is an asset.

To sum it up, it is always a personal preference to either
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buy
a
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house
or
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rent
a
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house
depending upon the requirement and circumstances. The world is a global village and
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people
are migrating from one place to another which increases the number of
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people
opting for this option.
Moreover
, the benefits of
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renting
outweighs than any of its drawbacks
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15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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