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Some believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? v.1

Some believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? v. 1
Some people opine that artificially intelligent robots will gradually replace human workers. In my opinion, this is very unlikely to happen. Simple human tasks can be performed by robots; however, complex jobs requiring cognitive touch will still need to be done by humans. This essay will discuss why only a few jobs will be replaced by robots and the others / the rest will continue to need human effort. Simple human tasks that are repetitive and conditional in nature can easily be automated. This is because companies believe that the accuracy and productivity of high volume monotonous tasks are higher when performed by robots than humans. A survey on automation in back end banking process in India reveal that not only does the process errors drop by 95% but also productivity increases by 80% if robotic automation is implemented. For these reasons, human effort on regular menial tasks can be replaced by robotic automation. On the other hand, jobs requiring qualities like emotion and intuition will continue to be done by humans. This is because fields like psychology will always need a doctor’s diagnosis. For instance, in the USA, while all patients undergo computer based mental tests, the patient’s diagnosis can only be confirmed accurate by a psychiatrist post face to face counseling sessions. Hence, many complex tasks that need human judgement cannot be replaced by robots. To conclude, it is quite possible for robots to replace a few human jobs. Artificially intelligent robots can replace simple human tasks and support them in a few complex tasks; however, they can never replace all complex tasks done by them. Ultimately, non monotonous tasks requiring human touch can never be fully replaced.
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workers. In my opinion, this is
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unlikely to happen. Simple
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tasks
can
be performed
by robots;
however
,
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still
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to
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by
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humans
. This essay will discuss why
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only
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jobs
will
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effort.

Simple
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tasks
that are repetitive and conditional in nature can
easily
be automated
. This is
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because
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companies
believe that the accuracy and productivity of high volume monotonous
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tasks
are higher when performed by robots than
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humans
. A survey on automation in back
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banking process in India reveal that not
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only
does the process errors drop by 95%
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also
productivity increases by 80% if robotic automation
is implemented
. For these reasons,
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effort on regular menial
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tasks
can
be replaced
by robotic automation.

On the other hand
,
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jobs
requiring qualities like emotion and intuition will continue to
be done
by
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humans
. This is
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because
fields like psychology will always
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need
a doctor’s diagnosis.
For instance
, in the USA, while all patients undergo computer based mental
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tests
, the patient’s diagnosis can
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only
be confirmed
accurate by a psychiatrist post face to face counseling sessions.
Hence
,
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tasks
that
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judgement cannot
be replaced
by robots.

To conclude
, it is quite possible for robots to
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a few
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human
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jobs
.
Artificially
intelligent robots can
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simple
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human
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tasks
and support them in a few
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complex
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tasks
;
however
, they can never
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all
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done by them.
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,
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non monotonous
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tasks
requiring
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human
touch can never be
fully
replaced.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
37Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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