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In some countries more people choose to live alone or by themselves in recent years. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development for the society.

In some countries more people choose to live alone or by themselves in recent years. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development for the society. gYDx1
Nowadays a new trend is big in that many of the Mars is want to live alone. This is happening due to progression of the technology and they tend to more towards the urban areas. According to my perspective it has a adverse effect on the individuals and the community. To comments with, living alone has become famous in some countries this is growing because of coming with the new technology. To explicate, everyone wants to settle in a urban areas due to abundant of the job opportunities. When people move to metropolitan cities the living expenses are more than rural area. Also, in these cities there are plethora of amenities available such as better health facilities, education, infrastructure and roads. Therefore, the individuals want to live within the nuclear family in nuclear family one can feel comfortable and relaxed rather than joint family. Who's the family burden and the responsibilities are more living with two generations. Moving further, one can get more privacy going to everyone has been busy in by doing their own task. So, full do not share their feelings with the family members. Furthermore, adverse effect living alone. Predominant one is that people become depressed and they feel lonely because there is a rule of nature that no one can live alone, each and every human depends each other. They do not meet with people in the nation their mental ability cannot be developed properly. Every human being has a requirement of love and affection, so in a family one can get easily. Apart from this the children living in the nuclear family they will only as they do not feel secure. Because the parents are working they do not give a proper time to them. In joint families offspring can learn social values and ethics from their grandparents. Whereas, they teach them discipline and how to respect with their elder ones. Eventually, old age people also want help from their program and they are emotionally attached with them. To conclude, with the family and around with the society has more benefits. It gives happiness and joy to all which are living in the world. No one can survive alone in this cloth because everyone relying upon each other in some way. Sometime it is a good to live alone and give time to ourselves but one can spend their most of the time with the people who are living in the surroundings
Nowadays a new trend is
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technology and
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adverse effect on the individuals and the community.

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has become
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in
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countries this is growing
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of coming with the new technology. To explicate, everyone
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wants
to settle in
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urban areas due to abundant of the job opportunities.
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move
to metropolitan cities the
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expenses are more than rural area.
Also
, in these cities there are plethora of amenities available such as better health facilities, education, infrastructure and roads.
Therefore
, the individuals
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want
to
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live
within the nuclear
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family
in nuclear
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one can feel comfortable and relaxed
rather
than joint
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. Who's the
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burden and the responsibilities are more
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with two generations. Moving
further
, one can
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get
more privacy going to everyone has been busy in by doing their
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own
task.
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So
, full do not share their feelings with the
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family
members.

Furthermore
, adverse effect
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living
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alone
. Predominant one is that
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people
become
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depressed and
they feel lonely
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because
there is a
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rule
of nature that no one can
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alone
, each and every human
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depends
each other. They do not
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with
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people
in the nation their mental ability cannot
be developed
properly
. Every human being has a requirement of
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love
and affection,
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so
in a
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family
one can
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get
easily
. Apart from this the children
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in the nuclear
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they will
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only
as they do not feel secure.
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the parents are working they do not give a proper time to them. In joint
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offspring can learn social values and ethics from their grandparents. Whereas, they teach them discipline and how to respect with their elder ones.
Eventually
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age
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also
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help
from their
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program and
they are
emotionally
attached with them.

To conclude
, with the
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family
and around with the society has more benefits. It gives happiness and joy to all which are
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living
in the world. No one can survive
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alone
in this cloth
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because
everyone
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relying
upon each other in
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some
way. Sometime it is a
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to
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live
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alone
and give time to ourselves
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but
one can spend their most of the time with the
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people
who are
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in the
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surroundings
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IELTS essay In some countries more people choose to live alone or by themselves in recent years. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development for the society.

Essay
  American English
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