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In some countries, more and more people are deciding to live alone. Why do you think this is? What are the advantages and disadvantages of living alone? v.1

In some countries, more and more people are deciding to live alone. Why do you think this is? What are the advantages and disadvantages of living alone? v. 1
In this modern world, due to advancements, internet technology has made everything available online with just a single click. So it has become easy for everyone to gain knowledge about any topic. I completely believe that it is a positive sign because the masses can search for data any time, and it improves their efficiency of work. To begin with, people can find information on the internet at any instant of time, and most importantly from any place with little efforts. Earlier, when the internet was not available, people had to go through a number of books and magazines to find the relevant information that requires a lot of effort and time. For instance, when tourists visit to a new country, they have little to no information about that place. Therefore, before visiting the nation, they can search the websites online to know about the region. After getting information, they not only visit all the important places there, but also make their trip more enjoyable. Hence, it is a boon for the people and makes their life easier. Moreover, people can learn with the help of material available on the internet. It improves their ability to do the work efficiently and takes lesser time to complete it. For example, when the students make projects in schools, they usually search relevant information on the internet regarding the subject so that they can gain in-depth knowledge of it and do not face any problem while making it. Further, it increases their accuracy in making the project. Thus, it is apparent that the internet boosts the capability of doing work, and it is a good thing for the people. To summarize, people can access details on any matter whenever they need, and it improves the quality of work. I am completely of the opinion, the internet is a boon for the people, and it makes the life of the people easier by easily providing the particulars.
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their ability to do the work
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projects in schools, they
usually
search relevant
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information
on the internet regarding the subject
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that they can gain in-depth knowledge of it and do not face any problem while making it.
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people
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details
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people
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the life of the
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easier by
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providing the particulars.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay In some countries, more and more people are deciding to live alone. Why do you think this is? What are the advantages and disadvantages of living alone? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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