Nowadays, it is clear that some people think that some essential measures should be applied to control noise. Meanwhile some individuals say that they can make noise as they like. I completely agree that it is better to reduce noise.
On the one hand, there are several reasons that people tend to make noise as they like. Firstly, some people feel more comfortable and free when creating noise from different activities and entertainment. For example, many of them have a trend that turning volume louder to enjoy their favorite songs which help them relaxed after a hectic day, although it can disturb their next-door neighbors. Moreover, someone think that noise is a part of industrialization and modernization process and it is unavoidable. The traffic noise or machine noise become familiar with urban citizens. While they feel do not have any exactly reasons to controls noise.
On the other hand, I think that there are various benefits if government impose some laws to strictly control noise. Firstly, noise has a harmful impact on people’s health. For example, I cannot go to bed in the night because of intrusive sounds. It has a huge impact on my quality work. I am not able to attention to my project and my health become bad. Meanwhile, the productivity of work may be reduced as a consequence of noise. A lot of white-collar workers feedback that they cannot fully attention to their work because of the constant noise from vehicles on the street or machine noise.
In conclusion, I agree that people can make the noise if they want. But it should be limited in order to have a better life.
Nowadays, it is
clear
that
some
people
think
that
some
essential measures should
be applied
to control
noise
.
Meanwhile
some
individuals say that they can
make
noise
as they like. I completely
agree
that it is better to
reduce
noise.
On the one hand, there are several reasons that
people
tend to
make
noise
as they like.
Firstly
,
some
people
feel more comfortable and free when creating
noise
from
different
activities and entertainment.
For example
,
many
of them have a trend that turning volume louder to enjoy their favorite songs which
help
them relaxed after a hectic day, although it can disturb their
next
-door neighbors.
Moreover
, someone
think
that
noise
is a part of industrialization and modernization process and it is unavoidable. The traffic
noise
or machine
noise
become familiar with urban citizens.
While
they feel do not have any exactly reasons to
controls
noise.
On the other hand
, I
think
that there are various benefits if
government
impose
some
laws to
strictly
control
noise
.
Firstly
,
noise
has a harmful impact on
people’s
health.
For example
, I cannot go to bed in the night
because
of intrusive sounds. It has a huge impact on my quality work. I am not able to attention to my project and my health become
bad
. Meanwhile, the productivity of work may be
reduced
as a consequence of
noise
.
A lot of
white-collar workers feedback that they cannot
fully
attention to their work
because
of the constant
noise
from vehicles on the street or machine noise.
In conclusion
, I
agree
that
people
can
make
the
noise
if they want.
But
it should
be limited
in order to have a better life.
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17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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