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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house they live in

In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house they live in dD1QP
Recently, a considerable number of people are curious about knowing the back history of a building they live in. They show tendency to search about the previous residents of their current houses also. In my opinion this is because each day more people are becoming eager to understand their previous generation. Investigating in old days and past times is always one of the most desirable entertainment of human. In fact, there are some people whom they find kinds of obsession in this matter. They become interested in any antique and vintage furnitures, even they prefer to have used objects. They simply do this because they admire history, they are curious about previous generations, they way they lived, their lifestyles, their houses and their belongings. For Some people showings interest in finding out who lived in their houses before them is exactly a remarkable example of this fantasy. In order to reach this aim, they can inquiry the old neighbours, the other way is asking mayoralty and talk with the mayor to give them some data about the building they settled in. Searching in books and reading the old magazines can give them cue too. And at last, maybe they should seek the children and grandchildren of the last owners of where they live now. All in all, for some people in some countries it is pleasant to search about the history of the houses they live in. The knowledge of awaring about previous events in where they settled now is satisfying for them.
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each day more
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people
are becoming eager to understand their
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previous
generation.

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days and past times is always one of the most desirable entertainment of human. In fact, there are
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people
whom they find kinds of obsession in this matter. They become interested in any antique and

vintage
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furnitures
, even they prefer to have
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used
objects. They
simply
do this
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because
they admire history, they are curious about
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previous
generations, they way they
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lived
, their lifestyles,

their
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houses
and their belongings.

For
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Some
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people
showings interest in finding out who
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lived
in their
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houses
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before
them is exactly a remarkable example of this fantasy. In

order to reach this aim, they
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, the other way is asking mayoralty and talk with the mayor to give them
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some
data about the building they settled in. Searching in books and reading the
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magazines can give them cue too. And at last, maybe they should seek the children and grandchildren of the last owners of where they
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live
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.

All in all, for
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some
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people
in
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countries it is pleasant to search about the history of the
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houses
they
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live
in. The knowledge of
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about
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previous
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events
in where they settled
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now
is satisfying for them.
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IELTS essay In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house they live in

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253 words
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