Eating only healthy food is really important for good health. In this regard, some people argue that government should levy a tariff on junk food because the number of health risks associated with consuming this kind of food is on the rise. This essay agrees up to a large extent that a higher rate of tax should paid by fast food companies.
Embarking with the most prominent features. Firstly, increasing taxes would raise prices and lower consumption. Fast food companies would pass on these taxes to consumers in the form of higher prices and this would lead to people not being able to afford junk food because it is too expensive. Owing to this, street food would soon become a luxury item and it would only be less harmful to the general public health. For instance, the cost of organic food has proven prohibitively expensive for most people and that is why only a small percentage of the population of its regulars.
Despite of this, on the paradoxical side people think that it is not an effective way because these food only prefer those people who do not have time to prepare their fooand they spend their time in office. Therefore, if authorities ought to increase the tax on junk food, then they will not care about the amount of money.
In conclusion, although some people think that it is not effective way, but according to my point of view, this this is the best way to reduce the amount of fast food people buy.
Eating
only
healthy
food
is
really
important
for
good
health. In this regard,
some
people
argue that
government
should levy a tariff on junk
food
because
the number of health
risks
associated with consuming this kind of
food
is on the rise. This essay
agrees
up to a large extent that a higher rate of
tax
should
paid
by
fast
food
companies
.
Embarking with the most prominent features.
Firstly
, increasing
taxes
would raise prices and lower consumption.
Fast
food
companies
would pass on these
taxes
to consumers in the form of higher prices and this would lead to
people
not being able to afford junk
food
because
it is too expensive. Owing to this, street
food
would
soon
become a luxury item and it would
only
be less harmful to the
general public
health.
For instance
, the cost of organic
food
has proven
prohibitively
expensive for most
people
and
that is
why
only
a
small
percentage of the population of its regulars.
Despite of
this, on the paradoxical side
people
think
that it is not an effective way
because
these
food
only
prefer those
people
who do not have time to prepare their
fooand
they spend their time in office.
Therefore
, if authorities ought to increase the
tax
on junk
food
, then they will not care about the amount of money.
In conclusion
, although
some
people
think
that it is not
effective
way,
but
according to my point of view,
this this
is the best way to
reduce
the amount of
fast
food
people
buy
.
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