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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the economy growth in most developed nations, certain percentage of population earn an above average income due to high paying job sectors and businesses. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of individuals earning high income and how it affects the economic conditions of each country. Recent economists and social psychologists have found that the large number of population in a country earning high income have got a significant growth in the country’s economy. High income jobs generate more tax payers in the country, significantly increasing the tax ratio of a country which helps the government in aiding to develop the nations GDP. Recent survey conducted by National Stock Exchange company in 2019, revealed that India’s stock market hit a staggering high as a result of lot of investors investing in stocks during the year. Although high income jobs help the economy but it also affects the lower middle class. This situation has caused a rift between the poor and rich forcing the lower middle class to also pay inflated taxes, it becomes difficult for young interns to secure a job because there are no vacancies as the jobs are preoccupied by over qualified people. For example, The Economic Times conducted a poll between the Recruiting companies and found that there has been a subsequent fall for vacancies at many reputed companies leaving the Post graduates and graduates with not many choices for jobs
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income
due to
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high
paying
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job
sectors and businesses. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of individuals earning
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high
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income
and how it affects the economic conditions of each country.

Recent economists and social psychologists have found that the large number of population in a
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country
earning
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high
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income
have
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a significant growth in the
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country’s
economy.
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High
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income
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jobs
generate more tax payers in the
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country
,
significantly
increasing the tax ratio of a
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country
which
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helps
the
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government
in aiding to develop the nations GDP. Recent survey conducted by National Stock Exchange
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company
in 2019, revealed that India’s stock market hit a staggering
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high
as a result
of lot of investors investing in stocks during the year.

Although
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high
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income
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jobs
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help
the economy
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affects the lower middle
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. This situation has caused a rift between the poor and rich forcing the lower middle
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class
to
also
pay inflated taxes, it becomes difficult for young interns to secure a
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job
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because
there are no vacancies as the
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jobs
are preoccupied
by over qualified
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people
.
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, The Economic Times conducted a poll between the Recruiting
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companies
and found that there has been a subsequent fall for vacancies at
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reputed
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companies
leaving the Post graduates and graduates with not
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many
choices for
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jobs
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IELTS essay In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
235 words
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