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Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Since the advent of the industrial age, manufacturing industries have been plagued with a dilemma, to manufacture long-lasting products, albeit a bit expensive, or to concentrate on producing inexpensive products on a large scale. This essay will discuss both these options and advocate the production of quality products that serve the user for a substantial period of time. Industries today churn out a plethora of products, from hairpins to aeroplanes, with an equally diverse range of price tags for each. Although the average consumer would no doubt always opt for a longer lasting alternative given the choice, it has to be borne in mind that the durability of a product is, in most cases, a reflection of the money it costs to produce.
Since the advent of the industrial age, manufacturing industries have
been plagued
with a dilemma, to manufacture long-lasting
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products
, albeit a bit expensive, or to concentrate on producing inexpensive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
on a large scale. This essay will discuss both these options and advocate the production of quality
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
that serve the user for a substantial period of time.

Industries
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today
churn out a plethora of
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products
, from hairpins to
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aeroplanes
, with an
equally
diverse range of price tags for each. Although the average consumer would no doubt always opt for a longer lasting alternative
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given
the choice, it
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has to
be borne
in mind that the durability of a
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product
is,
in most cases
, a reflection of the money it costs to produce.

IELTS essay Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
123 words
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