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in some cities of the world cars are replacing bicycle replacing cars. what are the reason for these development . in your opion which one is better

in some cities of the world cars are replacing bicycle replacing cars. what are the reason for these development. in your opion which one is better rklEm
The fast paced lifestyle ad inundated pressure in the workplace have changed the lifestyle. some masses prefer cars than bicycle in some cities. on the other hand people are prefering bicycle than cars. there are multifarious reasons behind this phenomenon and cast light on my personal perespectives. To embark with, there are ample of reasons which spread lights on the significance of cars replacing bicycle. the first and prominent one is in some developed countries people are using more cars owning to dizzing amount of bread and butter from which people are doing more work. so they have to cover longer distance
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perespectives
. To embark with, there are ample of reasons which spread lights on the significance of
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developed countries
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IELTS essay in some cities of the world cars are replacing bicycle replacing cars. what are the reason for these development. in your opion which one is better

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101 words
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