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In recent years, trialling by animals has been receiving a great deal of public attention. While there are some strong arguments against prohibiting those experiments

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In recent years, trialling by animals has been receiving a great deal of public attention. While there are some strong arguments against prohibiting those experiments, I tend toward the opposite view that the government should consider adopting some policies of banning this phenomenon. I still believe plenty of drawbacks are more significant than benefits. On the one hand, there are various reasons why many people contend to protect their perspectives of taking experiments on animal populations. First of all, one of the major principal causes holding a large number of supports is to come from the accusation and reliability of animals. To put it differently, mammals or predators such as mammoths, lions, hippos are presumed to have a similar trait in comparison with people’s characteristics hence the results of the study will be relatively more precise. The second is, according to several proposals, making a trial on animals has come into its own with striking achievements in the medical fields. As a matter of fact, numerous treatments via using animals to have animal experiments in advance had been recognized as an optimal method to cure certain diseases. On the other hand, although I still admit the advantages mentioned above, I am more inclined to lean with relevance to promulgate forbidden commands from the authorities. First and foremost, it is worth considering that the matter of killing animals to trial massively is less humanitarian action. In a case of fact, animals also have rights to survive and are active in their habitats like our population, anyone among us is not all permitted to steal or take one’s life no matter if they are animals. Besides that, it is not necessary to make an experiment on the animal population while the inventors take into account investigating other cutting-edge solutions alternatively. In particular, by implementing those ways, we could more or less contribute to prevent partly the destruction of the ecosystems and maintain biodiversity as well. Although both views definitely have some validity and rationality thereof, it seems to me that it is better to ban the scientists or anyone not to cause the death of animals to make an experiment in their lab.
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strong arguments against prohibiting those
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experiments
, I tend toward the opposite view that the
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government
should consider adopting
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policies of banning this phenomenon. I
still
believe
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of drawbacks are more significant than benefits.

On the one hand, there are various reasons why
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many
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people
contend to protect their perspectives of taking
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experiments
on
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animal
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, one of the major principal causes holding
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a large number of
supports is to
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come
from the accusation and reliability of
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animals
. To put it
differently
, mammals or predators such as mammoths, lions, hippos
are presumed
to have a similar trait
in comparison
with
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people
’s characteristics
hence
the results of the study will be
relatively
more precise. The second is, according to several proposals, making a trial on
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animals
has
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come
into its
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own
with striking achievements in the medical fields. As a matter of fact, numerous treatments via using
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animals
to have
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animal
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experiments
in advance had
been recognized
as an optimal method to cure certain diseases.

On the other hand
, although I
still
admit the advantages mentioned above, I am more inclined to lean with relevance to promulgate forbidden commands from the authorities.
First
and foremost, it is worth considering that the matter of killing
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animals
to trial
massively
is less humanitarian action. In a case of fact,
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animals
also
have rights to survive and are active in their habitats like our population, anyone among us is not all permitted to steal or take one’s life no matter if they are
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animals
.
Besides
that, it is not necessary to
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make
an
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experiment
on the
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animal
population while the inventors take into account investigating other cutting-edge solutions
alternatively
.
In particular
, by implementing those ways, we could more or less contribute to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
partly the destruction of the ecosystems and maintain biodiversity
as well
.

Although both views definitely have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
validity and rationality thereof, it seems to me that it is better to ban the scientists or anyone not to cause the death of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an
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experiment
in their lab.
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IELTS essay In recent years, trialling by animals has been receiving a great deal of public attention. While there are some strong arguments against prohibiting those experiments

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