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In recent years, television has contributed most to changing people's quality of life. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Improvements in the sphere of technology has made people's life more comfortable and easier than before. Some people say that technological items such as mostly television changed the quality of life than other factors, while others argue that there are other factors can influence on the life of people. I believe that televisions are better at changing standard of living for people. To begin with, It is believed by most of the people that watching TV is a waste of time. This is because by watching TV people may get a plenty of rest or maybe something important for their life but it is only for short-lasting periods and can not be thought to change the life of people. That's why other factors such as reading books should be expanded more among the people in order to make their life more realistic and unproblematic
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. I believe that televisions are better at changing standard of living for
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IELTS essay In recent years, television has contributed most to changing people's quality of life.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
143 words
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