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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this trend? You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience. Write at least 250 words.

Developing technology has been offering people digital books, some feel that the traditional reading format will soon become old-fashioned and be eventually replaced. Others feel that these forms of media will never vanish. Personally, I am more inclined to agree with the second viewpoint. Reading on screen is being popularly adopted these days due to its portability and potential cost savings; moreover is the ability to access books at any time anywhere on multiple devices. However, the pros of e-reading are matched with its cons. people find it hard to concentrate on digital squints and tend to move to task or skim through the contents rather than read- in- depth. Other than that, sleep quality can be affected around bed time which reduces productivity on the next day. Printed media is undeniably being declined thoroughly because of the inconvenience. For example, paper books can become obnoxious space occupiers, especially with people living in small apartments. It is perhaps more convenient and smarter to travel with a portable e-reader than 10 bulkier traditional books. Regardless, there are reasons people still choose paper books over the digital counterparts. Printed books bring people the experience of holding a physical book in their hands, flipping through real pages and smelling the paper, observing their reading journeys. Somehow book can become an heirloom of a family, records existence and leaves behind for generations. Thus, reading and traditional ways give people feelings that reading on screen can never afford. Everything we do now is gradually switched online, inevitably ebooks will thrive. Nevertheless I believe actual books will never become extinct because there are many of those who appreciate and value that format. Moreover reading paper books is better for people's health and concentration compared with ebooks. In the end, my perspective is clear: whatever changes may occur, traditional books are here to stay, without being diminished by digital books. After all, a shelf of books stands there to outlast people.
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some
feel that the
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traditional
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reading
format will
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soon
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become
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old
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eventually
replaced. Others feel that these forms of media will never vanish.
Personally
, I am more inclined to
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agree
with the second viewpoint.

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popularly
adopted these days due to its portability and potential cost savings;
moreover
is the ability to access
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books
at any time anywhere on multiple devices.
However
, the pros of e-reading
are matched
with its cons.
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people
find it
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hard
to concentrate on digital squints and tend to
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move
to task or skim through the contents
rather
than read- in- depth. Other than that, sleep quality can be
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affected
around
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bed time
which
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reduces
productivity on the
next
day. Printed media is
undeniably
being declined
thoroughly
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because
of the inconvenience.
For example
, paper
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books
can
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become
obnoxious space occupiers,
especially
with
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people
living in
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small
apartments. It is perhaps more convenient and smarter to travel with a portable e-reader than 10 bulkier
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traditional
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books
. Regardless, there are reasons
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people
still
choose paper
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books
over the digital counterparts. Printed
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books
bring
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people
the experience of holding a physical
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book
in their hands, flipping through real pages and smelling the paper, observing their
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reading
journeys. Somehow
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book
can
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become
an heirloom of a family, records existence and
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leaves
behind for generations.
Thus
,
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reading
and
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traditional
ways give
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people
feelings that
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reading
on screen can never afford. Everything we do
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now
is
gradually
switched online,
inevitably
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ebooks
will thrive.
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Nevertheless
I believe actual
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books
will never
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become
extinct
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because
there are
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many
of those who appreciate and value that format.
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Moreover
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reading
paper
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books
is better for
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people
's health and concentration compared with
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ebooks
. In the
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end
, my perspective is
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clear
: whatever
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changes
may occur,
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traditional
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books
are here to stay, without
being diminished
by digital
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books
.
After all
, a shelf of
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books
stands there to outlast
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people
.
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IELTS essay In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this trend? You should

Essay
  American English
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324 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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