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In recent years, . many 1maltlocal stiops ha1re closed because customerstravel to large shopping centres or. -malls to do their shopping. Is this. a. positive or a negative development? v.1

In recent years, . many 1maltlocal stiops ha1re closed because customerstravel to large shopping centres or. -malls to do their shopping. Is this. a. positive or a negative development? v. 1
Of late, visiting shopping centers or malls has become a sign of modernization. These days customers buy products from big shopping malls due to this fact many small shops closed in last few years. In my opinion it is negative development which impacts small time investors to do their business. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of shopping centers. Following this, reasoned conclusion will be shared. First and foremost, these days young generation do their education inclined with their business plan. Some of the youngster aspire to be a success entrepreneur in their life. To do this they start their first step by running a small local shop. Furthermore, on their success will expand their business with employing many candidates. This type of thought process helps economic and business growth in all sort of financial class, also overcomes the unemployment challenges. On the side, corporate companies started expanding their business in all sectors, nowadays you can buy grocery items, milk products, fruits and vegetables in shopping center. Many young students and next generation people believe that purchasing certain items in shopping centers provides them better offer price or cheap price then buying in local shops whereas most people not aware of hidden chargers. Additionally, it is a prestige matter that they can earn respect wearing a branded shirt or pant from big stores to show their status. To prove that, Anna University had done many surveys on buying products from shopping center and the results show that 80% of young people like to buy in shopping centers due to better discounts and 20% of people say they buy in local shops since they won’t charge extra tax on the items. To sum up, people who cares about economic growth and buying a product with reasonable price then should support small local shops.
Of late, visiting
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shopping
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centers
or malls has become a
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sign
of modernization. These days customers
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buy
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products
from
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big
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shopping
malls due to this fact
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many
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small
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shops
closed in last few years. In my opinion it is
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negative
development which impacts
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small time
investors to do their
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business
. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of
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shopping
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centers
. Following this, reasoned conclusion will
be shared
.

First
and foremost, these days young generation do their education inclined with their
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business
plan.
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Some of the
youngster aspire to be a success entrepreneur in their life. To do this they
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start
their
first
step by running a
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small
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local
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shop
.
Furthermore
, on their success will expand their
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business
with employing
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many
candidates. This type of
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thought
process
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helps
economic and
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business
growth in all sort of financial
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class
,
also
overcomes the unemployment challenges.

On the side, corporate
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companies
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started
expanding their
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business
in all sectors, nowadays you can
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buy
grocery items, milk
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products
, fruits and vegetables in
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shopping
center.
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Many
young students and
next
generation
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people
believe that purchasing certain items in
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shopping
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centers
provides them better offer price or
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cheap
price then buying in
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local
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shops
whereas most
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people
not aware of hidden chargers.
Additionally
, it is a prestige matter that they can earn respect wearing a branded shirt or pant from
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big
stores to
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show
their status. To prove that, Anna University had done
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many
surveys on buying
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products
from
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shopping
center and the results
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show
that 80% of young
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people
like to
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buy
in
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shopping
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centers
due to better discounts and 20% of
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people
say they
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buy
in
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local
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shops
since they won’t charge extra tax on the items.

To sum up,
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people
who
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cares
about economic growth and buying a
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product
with reasonable price then should support
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small
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local
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shops
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay In recent years, . many 1maltlocal stiops ha1re closed because customerstravel to large shopping centres or. -malls to do their shopping. Is this. a. positive or a negative development? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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