Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In recent years, cross-culture marriage has become common and widespread. This practice has brought about pros and cons. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon, in your opinion?

In recent years, cross-culture marriage has become common and widespread. This practice has brought about pros and cons. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon, in your opinion? J7GB
Nowadays, getting married to a person from another country becomes more and more popular and trivial. This phenomenon of marriage includes both benefits and drawbacks. This essay will discuss some pros and cons of cross-culture marriage. Getting married to a foreigner is not so unique to people today anymore. It is the most apparent reflection of our modern life’s development. There is the fact that couples belonging to different cultural backgrounds will have many chances to explore various living ways by sharing their traditions, customs, and lifestyles. Besides, cross-culture marriage helps their children to grow up comprehensively. The children can speak at least two languages fluently when they were just two or three if their parents are cross-cultural marriage couples. Moreover, biracial children will have lots of opportunities to visit their parent's homelands. This builds them a mosaic foundation of culture, which will help them a lot in the future. Despite these advantages that a multiracial family can get, there are some disadvantages they have to face. The language barrier is one of them. It may limit family members' communication. The primary purpose of communicating is to understand each other, but when the family members couldn’t understand what the other says, will they be comfortable and happy while living together? Another drawback is that the differences of culture in the family can lead to numerous misunderstanding situations. Their points of view, the way they think about life, the world, and their values is unfamiliar to the other. These issues can cause arguments or even break out. For example, different ways of thinking about raising children are also a big problem for the family. In conclusion, getting married to a foreigner is not just an ordinary marriage between two people. Everything has its pros and cons, and so does cross-culture marriage. It will be a complex challenge that the couple needs to overcome, but if it is true love, it has enough trust and respect, nothing else matters.
Nowadays, getting married to a person from another country becomes more and more popular and trivial. This phenomenon of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
marriage
includes both benefits and drawbacks. This essay will discuss
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
pros and cons of cross-culture marriage.

Getting married to a foreigner is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
unique to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
anymore. It is the most apparent reflection of our modern life’s development. There is the fact that couples belonging to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
cultural backgrounds will have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
chances to explore various living ways by sharing their traditions, customs, and lifestyles.
Besides
, cross-culture
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
marriage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
to grow up
comprehensively
. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
can speak at least two languages
fluently
when they were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
two or three if their parents are cross-cultural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
marriage
couples.
Moreover
, biracial
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
will have lots of opportunities to visit their parent's homelands. This builds them a mosaic foundation of culture, which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them a lot in the future.

Despite these advantages that a multiracial
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
disadvantages they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
face. The language barrier is one of them. It may limit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
members' communication. The primary purpose of communicating is to understand each other,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
when the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
members couldn’t understand what the other says, will they be comfortable and happy while living together? Another drawback is that the differences of culture in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
family
can lead to numerous misunderstanding situations. Their points of view, the way they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about life, the world, and their values is unfamiliar to the other. These issues can cause arguments or even break out.
For example
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
ways of thinking about raising
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
children
are
also
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
problem for the family.

In conclusion
, getting married to a foreigner is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
an ordinary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
marriage
between two
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. Everything has its pros and cons, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
does cross-culture
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
marriage
. It will be a complex challenge that the couple needs to overcome,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
if it is true
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
, it has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
trust and respect, nothing else matters.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay In recent years, cross-culture marriage has become common and widespread. This practice has brought about pros and cons. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon, in your opinion?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts