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Is it right to turn your hobby into a job.

Is it right to turn your hobby into a job. b99Y

Nowadays there are vast amount of people, who don’t satisfy with their job. They have been trying to find their vocation for the whole life but unfortunately they stronger and stronger suffer from disappointment. It’s obvious that once such person have chosen the wrong way and kind of job. Somebody could thrust advice on him and as a result the decision is made not according to his desire but against will. I feel sorry for such people, because years later they want to change their life, it happens they are not able to change their mind set. There is habitual, stable routine and they afraid of letting something new in. Especially get another job. So that’s why i think turning your hobby into your job is the right decision. But the only advice from me is to keep the gold middle. Don’t overburden, otherwise your hobby may become a disgusting nightmare.

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 another job.

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 turning your hobby into your job is the right decision. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 advice from me is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
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 the gold middle. Don’t overburden, otherwise
 your hobby may become a disgusting nightmare. 