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In recent years, a significant number of people are showing more preference for renting houses or apartments rather than buying.

In recent years, a significant number of people are showing more preference for renting houses or apartments rather than buying. Although the total costs of houses are out of people's budgets most if them are reluctant to rent. In this essay, I am going to discuss these views by explicating both pros and cons in the subsequent paragraphs. While it is certainly cheaper week-by-week to rent than pay a montage, the renter misses out on the large capital gains to be made when buying a home. For example, when I decided whether to buy or pay a rent for a house with two bedrooms, kitchen and bath, I found that it would be practical to rent. This is due to the fact I saved money by renting on other requirements which are crucial. In addition to this, I invested my montage payment to secure an acquisition of property that will remain valuable for my family in a long run. Thus, financial growth of this sort is better than purchasing. Nevertheless, renters will have a number of issues while arranging a rent. One of them is a noise. At present, most people especially in major cities are suffering from noise pollution that is made by sounds of vehicles and children. Further, individuals ought to repair or reconstruct the house with In recent years, a significant number of people are showing more preference for renting houses or apartments rather than buying. Although the total costs of houses are out of people's budgets most if them are reluctant to rent. In this essay, I am going to discuss these views by explicating both pros and cons in the subsequent paragraphs. While it is certainly cheaper week-by-week to rent than pay a mortage, the renter misses out on the large capital gains to be made when buying a home. For example, when I decided whether to buy or pay a rent for a house with two bedrooms, kitchen and bath, I found that it would be practical to rent. This is because i saved money by renting on other requirements which are crucial. In addition to this, I invested my mortage payment to secure an acquisition of property that will remain valuable for my family in a long run. Thus, financial growth of this sort is better than purchasing. Nevertheless, renters will have some issues while arranging a rent. One of them is a noise. At present, most people especially in major cities are suffering from noise pollution that is made by sounds of vehicles and children. Further, individuals have to repair or reconstruct the house with modern furniture and appliances. Therefore, drawbacks of renting are more challenging than benefits. All in all, for the reasons mentioned above it seems to me than despite disadvantages of paying mortage, advantages will outweigh its drawbacks. furniture and appliances. Therefore, drawbacks of renting are more challenging than benefits. All in all, for the reasons mentioned above it seems to me than despite disadvantages of paying montage, advantages will outweigh its drawbacks.
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people
are showing more preference for
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renting
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houses
or apartments
rather
than
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buying
. Although the total costs of
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houses
are out of
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people
's budgets most if them are reluctant to
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rent
. In this essay, I am going to discuss these views by explicating both pros and cons in the subsequent paragraphs.

While it is
certainly
cheaper week-by-week to
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rent
than
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pay
a montage, the
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renter
misses out on the large capital gains to
be made
when
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buying
a home.
For example
, when I decided whether to
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buy
or
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pay
a
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rent
for a
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house
with two bedrooms, kitchen and bath, I found that it would be practical to
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rent
. This is due to the fact I saved money by
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renting
on other requirements which are crucial.
In addition
to this, I invested my montage payment to secure an acquisition of property that will remain valuable for my family in a long run.
Thus
, financial growth of this sort is better than purchasing.

Nevertheless
,
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renters
will have a number of issues while arranging a
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rent
. One of them is a
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noise
. At present, most
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people
especially
in major cities are suffering from
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noise
pollution that
is made
by sounds of vehicles and children.
Further
, individuals ought to repair or reconstruct the
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house
with In recent years, a significant number of
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people
are showing more preference for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
renting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
houses
or apartments
rather
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buying
. Although the total costs of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
houses
are out of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's budgets most if them are reluctant to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rent
. In this essay, I am going to discuss these views by explicating both pros and cons in the subsequent paragraphs.

While it is
certainly
cheaper week-by-week to
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rent
than
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pay
a
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mortage
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
renter
misses out on the large capital gains to
be made
when
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buying
a home.
For example
, when I decided whether to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
or
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pay
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rent
for a
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house
with two bedrooms, kitchen and bath, I found that it would be practical to
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rent
. This is
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because
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i
saved money by
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renting
on other requirements which are crucial.
In addition
to this, I invested my
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mortage
payment to secure an acquisition of property that will remain valuable for my family in a long run.
Thus
, financial growth of this sort is better than purchasing.

Nevertheless
,
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renters
will have
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some
issues while arranging a
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rent
. One of them is a
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noise
. At present, most
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people
especially
in major cities are suffering from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
noise
pollution that
is made
by sounds of vehicles and children.
Further
, individuals
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have to
repair or reconstruct the
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house
with modern furniture and appliances.
Therefore
,
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drawbacks
of
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renting
are more challenging than benefits.

All in all, for the reasons mentioned above it seems to me than despite disadvantages of paying
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mortage
, advantages will outweigh its
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drawbacks
.
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furniture
and appliances.
Therefore
,
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drawbacks
of
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renting
are more challenging than benefits.

All in all, for the reasons mentioned above it seems to me than despite disadvantages of paying montage, advantages will outweigh its
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drawbacks
.
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IELTS essay In recent years, a significant number of people are showing more preference for renting houses or apartments rather than buying.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
504 words
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