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In recent times in a few nations, there is an increase in the number of people fancy of figuring out the history of the building where they live in.

In recent times in a few nations, there is an increase in the number of people fancy of figuring out the history of the building where they live in. pK222
In recent times in a few nations, there is an increase in the number of people fancy of figuring out the history of the building where they live in. There are some causes related to this tendency and several methods to find out the historical of the houses will be mentioned in this essay. There is a trend that people trying to explore their houses’ history. Let me begin by pointing out that it can be related to the owner of the house personality. Many people enjoy finding out the exact age of the house where they are in. They claimed that living in an ancient house would bring them luckiness and fortune as it signed for the eternity. Moreover, exploring the history of the house can help them understand more about the daily life of the previous owner. Another point worth nothing is that the past of the house is linking with spirituality. To illustrate, some people believe that their home can be haunted by spirits if the house was constructed on a burial mound. In order to discover more the story behind the house, some possible measurements can be taken into consideration. The most effective way is to read documents written about the construction of the house and other factors like Feng Shui related to it. They can be passed on from generation to generation. However, in case it has lost, Internet can be a useful tool to search information about the history of the place where we live in. For instance, from the Internet, I know that in the past my house was a rice paddy until ten years ago. In conclusion, there are many reasons why people are interested in identifying the history of their house as well as numerous ways to support this trend.
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history
.
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begin
by pointing out that it can
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to the owner of the
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house
personality.
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Many
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people
enjoy finding out the exact age of the
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house
where they are in. They claimed that living in an ancient
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house
would bring them luckiness and fortune as it signed for the eternity.
Moreover
, exploring the
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history
of the
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house
can
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help
them understand more about the daily life of the previous owner. Another point worth nothing is that the past of the
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house
is linking with spirituality. To illustrate,
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some
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people
believe that their home can
be haunted
by spirits if the
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house
was constructed
on a burial mound.

In order to discover more the story behind the
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house
,
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some
possible measurements can
be taken
into consideration. The most effective way is to read documents written about the construction of the
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house
and other factors like
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Feng
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Shui
related to it. They can
be passed
on from generation to generation.
However
, in case it has lost, Internet can be a useful tool to search information about the
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history
of the place where we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in.
For instance
, from the Internet, I know that in the past my
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house
was a rice paddy until ten years ago.

In conclusion
, there are
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many
reasons why
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people
are interested
in identifying the
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history
of their
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house
as well
as numerous ways to support this trend.
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IELTS essay In recent times in a few nations, there is an increase in the number of people fancy of figuring out the history of the building where they live in.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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