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In recent days, poverty seems to be a pervasive problem all around the world. The causes and effects of poverty are often interrelated in such a way that one problem hardly ever occurs alone. This essay will discuss the negative consequences of poverty on society such as the rise in crime, the economic downturn and the hierarchical discrimination in society .

In recent days, poverty seems to be a pervasive problem all around the world. The causes and effects of poverty are often interrelated in such a way that one problem hardly ever occurs alone. This essay will discuss the negative consequences of poverty on society such as the rise in crime, the economic downturn and the hierarchical discrimination in society. nEYK2
In recent days, poverty seems to be a pervasive problem all around the world. The causes and effects of poverty are often interrelated in such a way that one problem hardly ever occurs alone. This essay will discuss the negative consequences of poverty on society such as the rise in crime, the economic downturn and the hierarchical discrimination in society. In the first place, destitution can lead to crime increase. People living in run-down areas are not properly educated. Therefore, they can fall into social evils easily. According to the British Broadcasting Corporation (BBC) news, people are more likely to become criminals in poor areas. Another problem is the backward of economy. The poor people do not have enough money to pay for their living, they have no opportunity to expand production and business. Therefore, it impedes the economic development. Due to that insurmountable problem, the quality of products become worse, then trade between countries becomes more difficult. Finally, poverty can lead to the hierarchical discrimination in society. The impoverished people do not seem to be respected. They have to suffer from the indifference of the community. This can result in the gap between the poor and the wealthy people. It may cause disunity in society. As a result, they will become mentally unstable, refuse to strive and eventually become a burden of society. In conclusion, poverty causes a lot of harm to society such as the increase in crime, the recession of economy and the discrimination in the social hierarchy. Therefore, the government needs to have some policies to reduce poverty to improve the life of citizens.
In recent days,
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poverty
seems to be a pervasive
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problem
all around the world. The causes and effects of
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poverty
are
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often
interrelated in such a way that one
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problem
hardly ever occurs alone. This essay will discuss the
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negative
consequences of
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poverty
on
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society
such as the rise in crime, the economic downturn and the hierarchical discrimination in society.

In the
first
place, destitution can lead to crime increase.
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People
living in run-down areas are not
properly
educated.
Therefore
, they can fall into social evils
easily
. According to the British Broadcasting Corporation (BBC) news,
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people
are more likely to
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become
criminals in poor areas.

Another
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problem
is the backward of economy. The poor
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people
do not have
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enough
money to pay for their living, they have no opportunity to expand production and business.
Therefore
, it impedes the economic development. Due to that insurmountable
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problem
, the quality of products
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become
worse, then trade between countries
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becomes
more difficult.

Finally
,
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poverty
can lead to the hierarchical discrimination in
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society
. The impoverished
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people
do not seem to
be respected
. They
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have to
suffer from the indifference of the community. This can result in the gap between the poor and the wealthy
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people
. It may cause disunity in
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society
.
As a result
, they will
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become
mentally unstable, refuse to strive and
eventually
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become
a burden of society.

In conclusion
,
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poverty
causes
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a lot of
harm to
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society
such as the increase in crime, the recession of economy and the discrimination in the social hierarchy.
Therefore
, the
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government
needs to have
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some
policies to
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reduce
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poverty
to
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improve
the life of citizens.
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IELTS essay In recent days, poverty seems to be a pervasive problem all around the world. The causes and effects of poverty are often interrelated in such a way that one problem hardly ever occurs alone. This essay will discuss the negative consequences of poverty on society such as the rise in crime, the economic downturn and the hierarchical discrimination in society.

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5 paragraphs
268 words
6.0
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