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Increasing petrol price solves the pollution and traffic problems.

Increasing petrol price solves the pollution and traffic problems. 0lPbB
Now-a-days, production and usage of petrol driven vehicles are spontaneously increasing. Every household has at least one vehicle. People use more motor bikes and cars which are fed by petrol because it helps to reach in time and reduce the energy used for walking. In this busy world, life without this wonderful invention is unimaginably depressing. Though it is extremely useful, it has some serious disadvantages such as pollution, traffic and global warming. Will increasing the petrol price solve these problems. It do decrease the pollution and traffic. But increasing the petrol cost will affect the people. Most of the earnings would be spent for transport. Due to which, people tend to decrease using fuel driven automobiles, which in turn reduce pollution and traffic. But this causes humans to suffer because they need to manage their family, feed their children and pay tuition fees for their young ones. Also, if fuel cost is raised, we need to make many new adjustsments. If we consider taking public transport or walk or cycle, we must plan accordingly, we should leave from home early, wait till the bus comes. This is really troublesome and time consuming compared to taking car or bike. Despite this solution solves problem of pollution and traffic, I disagree with this solution. I think it is better to implement any other measures to solve the problem. Instead of making fuel cost high, one household should have only one automobile rule can be implemented. Also, vehicles must not be allowed to use after particular time. Setting time limit for automobiles usage can help in reducing pollution. And, steps should be taken to make public transport easier and comfortable so that people would be more willing to use them.
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petrol
driven vehicles are
spontaneously
increasing. Every household has at least one vehicle.
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People
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use
more motor bikes and cars which
are fed
by
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petrol
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because
it
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helps
to reach in
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time
and
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reduce
the energy
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used
for walking. In this busy world, life without this wonderful invention is
unimaginably
depressing. Though it is
extremely
useful, it has
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some
serious disadvantages such as
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pollution
,
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traffic
and global warming.

Will increasing the
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petrol
price solve these problems. It
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do
decrease the
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pollution
and
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traffic
.
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But
increasing the
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petrol
cost will affect the
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people
. Most of the earnings would
be spent
for transport. Due to which,
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people
tend to decrease using fuel driven automobiles, which in turn
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reduce
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.
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But
this causes humans to suffer
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because
they need to manage their family, feed their children and pay tuition fees for their young ones.
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, if fuel cost
is raised
, we need to
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make
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many
new
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adjustsments
. If we consider taking public transport or walk or cycle, we
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plan
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leave
from home early, wait till the bus
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. This is
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time consuming
compared to taking car or bike.

Despite this solution solves problem of
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and
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traffic
, I disagree with this solution. I
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think
it is better to implement any other measures to solve the problem.
Instead
of making fuel cost high, one household should have
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only
one automobile
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can
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.
Also
, vehicles
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must
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allowed
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use
after particular
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time
. Setting
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time
limit for automobiles usage can
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help
in reducing
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pollution
. And, steps should
be taken
to
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make
public transport easier and comfortable
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that
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people
would be more willing to
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IELTS essay Increasing petrol price solves the pollution and traffic problems.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
288 words
5.5
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