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In past people made better use of time than toady. Do you agree or disagree

In past people made better use of time than toady. Ny7Qb
It is generally argued that the time was utilised in good way by prior individuals as compared to nowadays. I agree with this viewpoint and will discuss this notion in upcoming paragraphs along with plausible conclusion. To commence with, masses were used their time very wisely in the past. In other words, whenever they got some leisure time they utilised it for those activities that were beneficial for them. For example, they played some outdoor games or did some exercise and yoga to kept their body fit, so they performed their daily activities efficiently and effectively. But today's individuals prefer to do indoor activities like playing videos, watch television and so on which are not good for their health as it effect their eye-sights and became the cause of many other diseases. Thus, toady's individuals not using their time in better way as people used in past. Furthermore, in past the human beings were very puncutal as they never get late to complete their work and they try to save time as much as they can to did more work but toady's generation is very lazy as they ignore they importance of time and waste their time in doing uncessary things. For instance, most of the time in day they spend in talking unnecessary with their friends despite of doing their work or spend time with their family. In this way current day people not utilise their time for good activities. To conclude, earlier individuals known the importance of time and they used their evey second of life in useful activites but modren people are not much aware about the that thus why the waste their golden time in doing worst things.
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argued that the
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was
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utilised
in
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good
way by prior
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individuals
as compared to nowadays. I
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agree
with this viewpoint and will discuss this notion in upcoming paragraphs along with plausible conclusion.

To commence with, masses were
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used
their
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time
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very
wisely
in the past.
In other words
, whenever they
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got
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some
leisure
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time
they
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utilised
it for those activities that were beneficial for them.
For example
, they played
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some
outdoor games or did
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some
exercise and yoga to
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kept
their body fit,
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so
they performed their daily activities
efficiently
and
effectively
.
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But
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today
's
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individuals
prefer to do indoor activities like playing videos,
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watch
television and
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so
on which are not
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good
for their health as it effect their eye-sights and became the cause of
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many
other diseases.
Thus
, toady's
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individuals
not using their
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time
in better way as
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people
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used
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in past
.

Furthermore
, in past the human beings were
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very
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puncutal
as they never
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get
late to complete their
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work and
they try to save
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time
as much as they can to did more work
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but
toady's generation is
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very
lazy as they
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ignore
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they importance
of
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time
and waste their
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time
in doing
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uncessary
things.
For instance
, most of the
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time
in day they spend in talking unnecessary with their friends
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despite of
doing their work or spend
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time
with their family. In this way
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current
day
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people
not
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utilise
their
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time
for
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good
activities.

To conclude
, earlier
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individuals
known the importance of
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time and
they
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used
their
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evey
second of life in useful
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activites
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but
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modren
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people
are not much aware about the that
thus
why the waste their golden
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time
in doing
A determiner is probably missing here: "the worst".
worst
things.
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IELTS essay In past people made better use of time than toady.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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