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In order to tackle traffic and pollution issues, it is suggested that cost of petrol should be risen.

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In order to tackle traffic and pollution issues, it is suggested that cost of petrol should be risen. This suggestion may have an effect on traffic naf partially on pollution, however i do not believe that it will totally reduce the environmental pollution. Therefore, I partially agree this opinion. In addition, this essay will present other measurments for these problems. On the one hand, increasing price value of petrol will probably affect firstly ordinary people's budget. They will likely struggle with affording it daily. Consequently, they will likelihood ride bicycl or public transport in order to commute. As a result, the number of individual cars on the roads will decrease dramatically. Therefore, traffic and pollutions such as contamination of water, carbon footprint will see downward trend. For example, BBC reported that last year Sweden utilized this way and observed good results in terms of declining the number of the cars as well as air pollution. Ont the other hand, climbing petrol prices will probably attract the interests of energy companies to get benefit with the using of producing more crude oil. At the end, the environment onshore and offshore will experience massive contamination again. For instance, in 2008 high value on petrol attracted a lot of attentions not only companies but also developed countries to profit economically. Ultimately, nowadays we suffer from our former poloticial benefits in terms of global warming. In my opinion, to get away from fuel energy and shift to renewable energy resources will solve our both traffic and pollution issues. To sum up, the price of fuel will solve problems not totally but partially. That is why I am partially behind this opinion.
In order to tackle
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traffic
and
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pollution
issues, it
is suggested
that cost of
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petrol
should
be risen
. This suggestion may have an effect on
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traffic
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naf
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partially
on
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pollution
,
however
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i
do not believe that it will
totally
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reduce
the environmental
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pollution
.
Therefore
, I
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partially
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agree
this opinion.
In addition
, this essay will present other
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measurments
for these problems.

On the one hand, increasing price value of
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petrol
will
probably
affect
firstly
ordinary
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people
's budget. They will likely struggle with affording it daily.
Consequently
, they
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will likelihood
ride
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bicycl
or public transport in order to commute.
As a result
, the number of individual cars on the roads will decrease
dramatically
.
Therefore
,
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traffic
and
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pollutions
such as contamination of water, carbon footprint will
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see
downward trend.
For example
, BBC reported that last year Sweden utilized this way and observed
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good
results in terms of declining the number of the cars
as well
as air pollution.

Ont the other hand, climbing
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petrol
prices will
probably
attract the interests of energy
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companies
to
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get
benefit with the using of producing more crude oil. At the
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end
, the environment onshore and offshore will experience massive contamination again.
For instance
, in 2008 high value on
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petrol
attracted
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a lot of
attentions not
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only
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companies
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but
also
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developed countries
to profit
economically
.
Ultimately
, nowadays we suffer from our former
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poloticial
benefits in terms of global warming.

In my opinion, to
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get
away from fuel energy and shift to renewable energy resources will solve our both
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traffic
and
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pollution
issues.

To sum up, the price of fuel will solve problems not
totally
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but
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partially
.
That is
why I am
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partially
behind this opinion.
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IELTS essay In order to tackle traffic and pollution issues, it is suggested that cost of petrol should be risen.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
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