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I believe that there are also some difficulties when they choose to build houses in their own styles

I believe that there are also some difficulties when they choose to build houses in their own styles Xy5AY
On the other hand, I believe that there are also some difficulties when they choose to build houses in their own styles. Firstly, in some places where is very difficult to obtain construction license and built documentation. The design drawings and structure of the house after construction are very carefully checked by a competent authority, especially in big cities. Secondly, building a house is very complicate and big job, so construction costs are carefully calculated and estimated. For example, material costs can be incurred since construction can be delayed. Besides, they have to spend for the architect to design the house.
On the other hand
, I believe that there are
also
some
difficulties when they choose to build
houses
in their
own
styles.
Firstly
, in
some
places where is
very
difficult to obtain
construction
license and built documentation. The design drawings and structure of the
house
after
construction
are
very
carefully
checked
by a competent authority,
especially
in
big
cities.
Secondly
, building a
house
is
very
complicate and
big
job,
so
construction
costs are
carefully
calculated and estimated.
For example
, material costs can
be incurred
since
construction
can
be delayed
.
Besides
, they
have to
spend for the architect to design the
house
.
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IELTS essay I believe that there are also some difficulties when they choose to build houses in their own styles

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