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In order to overcome stress, some psychologists recommend doing nothing at all for a period of time during the day. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

In order to overcome stress, some psychologists recommend doing nothing at all for a period of time during the day. 5QXQ

Every human being has to carry the burden of a job or business on his shoulders for a good standard of living. Some psychiatrists advise people who are bothered by the pressures of office work to spend some time doing nothing at all. However. Patients benefit from this initiative, in my opinion, mental sufferers should focus on something else instead of doing nothing at all. The following essay on this subject is considered. First of all, it is quite reasonable to say that there are many benefits to trying to keep your mind free from worldliness and workload. In other words, if a person keeps his mind relaxed, his brain will be fresh and more capable of carrying the burden of work again in the future. As a result, man will be able to understand every difficult task with a great caliber and will be able to prove himself in the specific work given to do. In addition, some people are burdened with work so much that they work in their spare time, even on holidays. If their minds are relaxed, they can spend their free time with their family and friends, enjoying the inner delightfulness, they get from experiencing happiness. For illustration, when we are away from the daily grind of work, going on vacation to visit our relatives and acquaintances, and the two happy moments spent with them give us infinite fascination and, because of this once we get rid out of the pressure of our work and feel relaxed. Despite being completely idle, another very effective measure can be adopted, if human beings can spend their time visiting other activities such as traveling to new places, and enjoying the environment of such tourist destinations to the fullest, then, on the one hand, their mind will fall elsewhere and on the other, the desire to know the importance of that place that was in their minds will go away. Essentially, even if you keep yourself completely idle for a while, you can go into a kind of solitude and get rid of your worries for a while. In my opinion, traveling to a better place with a sigh of relief or, increasing the interaction in your relationship would be more effective.

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