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In order to improve a country’s education system, young students should be allowed to openly criticize their teachers during class time

In order to improve a country’s education system, young students should be allowed to openly criticize their teachers during class time gxena
Teachers will get to know right away when their teaching is too hard to follow then improvises the lesson plan. This could greatly help students in understanding the lesson. As a results, both the teacher and the student can benefit from the situation as one teaching skills will be improved while the other academic performance would vastly advance. If the teacher does not receive feedback from the students, both sides would not be able to understand the other’s needs and negatively affects the learning efficient as a whole.
Teachers will
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get
to know right away when their teaching is too
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hard
to follow then improvises the lesson plan. This could
greatly
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help
students in understanding the lesson. As
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a results
, both the teacher and the student can benefit from the situation as one teaching
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skills
will be
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improved
while the other academic performance would
vastly
advance. If the teacher does not receive feedback from the students, both sides would not be able to understand the other’s needs and
negatively
affects the learning efficient as a whole.
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IELTS essay In order to improve a country’s education system, young students should be allowed to openly criticize their teachers during class time

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