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my description was eloquent enough I don't need to explain more or elaborate details about it my privacy is what matters to me you should be careful because you never know which straw will break the camel's back. I'm interested in labor works as much as office jobs I don't like to be forced to do something I don't want to also I don't like people who get others to do works outside the employment contract I'm not the kinda people who want to keep up with the Joneses
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IELTS essay job applicant for a small company

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
88 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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