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In most countries, multicultural companies and their products become more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In most countries, multicultural companies and their products become more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. 7O0A
Going up with cooperation countries developing, multicultural companies come and virtually increase produce virtually increasingly, which is more and more important. It plays role in the economy and quality of life, the role makes it multifaceted- but not seriously damaging at all. Merit demerit When a multicultural company comes, their products are new things: a better quality, a better experience, a better learning, etc. If a company is good, their products will be welcomed very hard on market. That says, multicultural company increases quality products, it is a good mark. User or buyers’ response are always a visually good sign. When users or buyers give a product a best seller, which urges to domestic producer to advance their quality. The domestic producer has to be into learning and changing progress. Thus, products on market get on improvement- both multicultural and domestic ones. A multiculturalMulticultural company comes, gives foreign direct investment and occupation opportunities to a country. It increases the domestic economy, solute job problem. By demand of employees, they educate our worker with high quality and ability. They provide multicultural and equal opportunity input and advancement which do interest to us. By saying that, they help to solute job problems and offer a better working environment. So on, their products give a competitive price which is an advantage for users/ buyers. The advantage leads consumption interests which become trends for a job. The job will be developing, economy increases the value. Also, multicultural companies bring various cultures from most two sources. A little of them could popularize their culture with product advertisements to people. Employees who work together could affect the culture of each other. These opened culture evenly widely spread on diversified education, news, music, movie investment. It advances our spiritual life. The economy, together with the spiritual life, is a foundation to most of life aspects, especially quality of life. A multiculturalMulticultural company makes it. Little multicultural companies could cheat on laws, they could waste our environment or do something even worse, but that is their choice and doing, not featured a trend or jobs.
Going up with cooperation countries developing,
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multicultural
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companies
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come
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increase
produce
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increasingly
, which is more and more
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important
. It plays role in the
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economy
and
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quality
of
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life
, the role
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makes
it multifaceted-
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but
not
seriously
damaging at all.

Merit demerit

When a
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multicultural
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company
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comes
, their
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products
are new things: a
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better
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quality
, a
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better
experience, a
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better
learning, etc. If a
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company
is
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good
, their
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products
will
be welcomed
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very
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hard
on market. That says,
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multicultural
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company
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increases
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quality
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products
, it is a
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good
mark.

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visually
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good
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sign
. When users or buyers give a
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product
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a
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best seller
, which urges to
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domestic
producer to advance their
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quality
. The
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domestic
producer
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has to
be into learning and changing progress.
Thus
,
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products
on market
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get
on improvement- both
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multicultural
and
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domestic
ones.

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multiculturalMulticultural
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company
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comes
, gives foreign direct investment and occupation opportunities to a country. It
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increases
the
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domestic
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economy
, solute
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job
problem. By demand of employees, they educate our worker with high
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quality
and ability. They provide
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multicultural
and equal opportunity input and advancement which do interest to us. By saying that, they
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help
to solute
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job
problems and offer a
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better
working environment.
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So
on, their
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products
give a competitive price which is an advantage for users/ buyers. The advantage leads consumption interests which become trends for a
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job
. The
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job
will be developing,
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economy
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increases
the value.

Also
,
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multicultural
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companies
bring various
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cultures
from most two sources. A
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little
of them could popularize their
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culture
with
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product
advertisements to
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people
. Employees who work together could affect the
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culture
of each other. These opened
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culture
evenly
widely
spread on diversified education, news, music, movie investment. It advances our spiritual life.

The
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economy
, together with the spiritual
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life
, is a foundation to most of
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life
aspects,
especially
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quality
of
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life
. A
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multiculturalMulticultural
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company
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makes
it.
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Little
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multicultural
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companies
could cheat on laws, they could waste our environment or do something even worse,
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but
that is
their choice and doing, not featured a trend or
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jobs
.
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IELTS essay In most countries, multicultural companies and their products become more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
347 words
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