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In modern times , it has become more common for people to rent a house their entire lives instead of buying a house. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.

In modern times, it has become more common for people to rent a house their entire lives instead of buying a house. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting. 1V7jN
Nowaredays, renting a house or apartment is much more cheaper than purchasing, as a result, humans are more likely to rent a house or apartment, where they can live there till the end of their lives. From my own perspective, purchasing a house is much more logical and less problematic than renting a house. This essay will examine merits and demerits of this debatable issue. First of all, when it comes to the cost, it seems like renting a house is much more cheaper. However, paying monthly doesn’t mean that person will pay only for the house, person should pay for the gas, lights and other needs. Secondly, there is no guarantee that a person will live there for entire life. If owner of that house will find potential client who can pay more than a person who was renting, owner can give the keys of the house to that potential client. Additionally, moving from one house to another is really problematic and being prepared to pack all the stuff again is annoying and can lead to anxiousness, stress. On the other hand, renting a house is really great opportunity, if a person is not planing staying for a long time and loves exploring other streets and houses. Changing houses will be beneficial for knowing the city or country more. Additionally, it gives a chance to see the real life of a local people. Secondly, it gives people chance to earn money and now, it even became a type of profession. Giving houses to rent is really great source of income. To conclude, even if renting house has merits, demerits outweigh benefits of this issue
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,
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renting
a
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house
or apartment is much
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more cheaper
than purchasing,
as a result
, humans are more likely to rent a
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house
or apartment, where they can
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live
there till the
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end
of their
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lives
. From my
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own
perspective, purchasing a
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house
is much more logical and less problematic than
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renting
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
. This essay will examine merits and demerits of this debatable issue.
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First of all
, when it
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comes
to the cost, it seems like
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renting
a
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house
is much
Use only "cheaper" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more cheaper
.
However
, paying monthly doesn’t mean that
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person
will pay
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only
for the
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house
,
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person
should pay for the gas, lights and other needs.
Secondly
, there is no guarantee that a
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person
will
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live
there for entire life. If owner of that
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house
will find potential client who can pay more than a
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person
who was
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renting
, owner can give the keys of the
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house
to that potential client.
Additionally
, moving from one
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house
to another is
really
problematic and
being prepared
to pack all the stuff again is annoying and can lead to anxiousness,
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stress
.
On the other hand
,
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renting
a
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house
is
really
great opportunity, if a
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person
is not planing staying for a long time and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loves
exploring other streets and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
houses
. Changing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
houses
will be beneficial for knowing the city or country more.
Additionally
, it gives a chance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the real life of a local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
Secondly
, it gives
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
chance to earn money and
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now
, it even became a type of profession. Giving
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houses
to rent is
really
great source of income.
To conclude
, even if
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renting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
has merits, demerits outweigh benefits of this
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issue
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IELTS essay In modern times, it has become more common for people to rent a house their entire lives instead of buying a house. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.

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