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Gadgets We Can’t Live Without

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In this topik I want speak about one thing we can't live without. We use them on a daily basis and they support and supplement our daily chores. And my topic is about a technological gadget that I tend to use. Frankly speaking, in my entire life, I have got so many opportunities so as to use a variety of technological gadgets. But, today I would like to talk about a very special gadget which is nothing but a laptops that was gifted by my father at one of my birthday parties. Actually, there is an increasing number of reasons why I use this particular gadget. We literally sleep with our laptops. We work on them, watch movies, store pictures, videos, information, access our mails, and social networking sites. Yes, these things are available on cell phones too, but it’s not as comfortable and as convenient as a laptop. The most important point is that we carry our laptops everywhere we go; For presentations in meetings, making projects, burning CD’s, watching videos, research, read books, listen to songs, etc. It’s portable, light and so convenient. It is something we can’t do without. . Another most important point is that I can have easy access in order to keep in touch with my family members along with my friends. Last but not least, it also has an opportunity to surf the internet that incredibly helps me out to perform my daily affairs.

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 in touch with my family members along with my friends.

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