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In May countries, it is now illegal to smoke in public places, it is unfair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree

In May countries, it is now illegal to smoke in public places, it is unfair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. 2b6ew

Smoking is an injuries to health regarded not allowing in the community. However, a few of nation argued that smoking in provided places are unfair to users. Personally, I strongly support the rules of those lands who counted smoking in public is against the laws and it is not unlike to leave the place of public by smokers. To embark on the supportive things, smoking in the crowded does not abide by the laws in various lands; consequently, the smoke left from the cigrette emits a plethora of chemicals, whereas, it could harm the human body organs. For instance, a numerous mankind enduring from lung cancer and throat cancer. As per research, the patients from cancer are rapidly increasing from few years. Furthermore, a half of the nation of each country are edictd of smoking and they do not realise about the surrounding to start burning a cigarette. Which could hazards the others by influencing them. For example, the youth of colleges and universities do smoking to show off to the others students. They thought that it looks cool to do smoking in between the enormous persons. It is not unfair to the smokers to go outside from the areas human involved. The authority of an individual land provides the zones to do smoking in private and it's fair for the rest of citizens to be safe. In addition, the youngsters or children might not be adopt the habits of this. They can focus on their future instead of being hero. To conclude, it is widely known that taking drugs or intoxicated in human body hurt the all organs and lead to the major health issues like cancer. To add on it, the career of learners could also deteriorate by smokers in locals. Indeed, it is best law to imposed in each country to stop smoking in public lands and individual administration should take action against them.

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Smoking
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an injuries
 to health regarded not allowing in the community. However
, a few of nation argued that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfrenziedfanaticaldeliriouszealousenthusiasticcrazed
smoking
 in provided places are unfair to users. Personally
, I strongly
 support the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 of those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
lands
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smoking
 in public is against the laws and it is not unlike to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 the place of public by smokers.

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smoking
 in the crowded does not abide by the laws in various You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
lands
; consequently
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left
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cigrette
 emits a plethora of chemicals, whereas, it could harm the human body organs. For instance
, a numerous mankind enduring from lung You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtumorcorruptionmalignancydiseasesickness
cancer
 and throat You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtumorcorruptionmalignancydiseasesickness
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. As per research, the patients from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtumorcorruptionmalignancydiseasesickness
cancer
 are rapidly
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edictd
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smoking and
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realise
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start
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Which
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hazards
 the others by influencing them. For example
, the youth of colleges and universities do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfrenziedfanaticaldeliriouszealousenthusiasticcrazed
smoking
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 off to the others students. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 that it looks cool to do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfrenziedfanaticaldeliriouszealousenthusiasticcrazed
smoking
 in between the enormous persons.

It is not unfair to the smokers to go outside from the areas human involved. The authority of an individual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
land
 provides the zones to do You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfrenziedfanaticaldeliriouszealousenthusiasticcrazed
smoking
 in private and it's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :equitable
fair
 for the rest of citizens to be safe. In addition
, the youngsters or children might not be Consider using a past participle here: "adopted".adopted
adopt
 the habits of this. They can focus on their future instead
 of being hero.

To conclude
, it is widely
 known that taking drugs or intoxicated in human body hurt the all organs and lead to the major health issues like You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtumorcorruptionmalignancydiseasesickness
cancer
. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 on it, the career of learners could also
 deteriorate by smokers in locals. Indeed
, it A determiner is probably missing here: "is the best".is the best
is best
 law to imposed in each country to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfrenziedfanaticaldeliriouszealousenthusiasticcrazed
smoking
 in public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestatesoilterrainhomeearthcontinent
lands
 and individual administration should take action against them. 