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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? v.18

Some people consider that preserving environment is more crucial than building new houses in rural areas. However, due to unlimited space available for building new buildings it is more preferrable by people. In my opinion, although nee homes are basic needs of an individual, having responsible outlook, which include preserving natural habitat, is the key. Due to increase in population in many large cities, land space for construction have become limited. This, wider population is moving to countryside as there is less population and no pollution. Owing to this, there will be more facilities in villages as people who have skills will reside in villages. For example, doctors returning to small villages can promote health benefits to people by setting up a clinic. This will also improve job opportunities in the places which were ignored earlier. However, housing is a basic requirement for humans on the contrary, it also becomes a responsibility towards preserving natural beauty. A planned method should be adopted to decide what type of houses to be built and how they can be constructed in more environmentally friendly way. For instance, government should enforce strict rules and regulations which need to followed by the public. Exclusively certain areas must be allowed for housing, keeping the natural habitat un disturbed. In this way villages will also develop like cities by retaining its scenery. To conclude, living midsts natural environment is a boon for humans where there is ample fresh air and less pollution. Moreover, such surroundings need protection and lots of care. Humans need to be kind towards nature while fulfilling their needs.
Some
people
consider that preserving environment is more crucial than building new
houses
in rural areas.
However
, due to unlimited space available for building new buildings it is more
preferrable
by
people
. In my opinion, although
nee
homes are basic
needs
of an individual, having responsible outlook, which include preserving
natural
habitat, is the key.

Due to increase in population in
many
large cities, land space for construction have become limited. This, wider population is moving to countryside as there is less population and no pollution. Owing to this, there will be more facilities in
villages
as
people
who have
skills
will reside in
villages
.
For example
, doctors returning to
small
villages
can promote health benefits to
people
by setting up a clinic. This will
also
improve
job opportunities in the places which were
ignored
earlier.

However
, housing is a basic requirement for humans
on the contrary
, it
also
becomes a responsibility towards preserving
natural
beauty. A planned method should
be adopted
to decide what type of
houses
to
be built
and how they can
be constructed
in more
environmentally
friendly way.
For instance
,
government
should enforce strict
rules
and regulations which
need
to followed by the public. Exclusively certain areas
must
be
allowed
for housing, keeping the
natural
habitat
un
disturbed. In this way
villages
will
also
develop like cities by retaining its scenery.

To conclude
, living midsts
natural
environment is a boon for humans where there is ample fresh air and less pollution.
Moreover
, such surroundings
need
protection and lots of care. Humans
need
to be kind towards nature while fulfilling their
needs
.
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IELTS essay In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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