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In many places,new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in countryside.Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this? XYAg
Many cities are expanding from countryside by constructing homes and the highrise buildings. There are no possibility to build new constraction in the city, by protecting environment near countryside. In my opinion, as the city become crowded, there is an expansion from outskirts for residential purpose. Firstly, cities become over populated due to young people are migrating to cities from villages for vast career opportunities. As there are increasing people who want to purchase home, but there are only old buildings which are possible to renovate in cities. The reason behind these, there are no more wide open space especially for construction although there are space for airports, parks, and grounds for the sport activities. Such as in Rajkot there is no new construction possible in the area like Gundawad and Laxminagar; but, new building are available near another area like the Sadhuvasavani road and the New 150ft ring road. Secondly, Countryside there are land of the forest and the farmes which need to cutdown for the building purpose. In addition, it affects an environment and a wildlife in many aspects such as, the Lions in the Gir forest are easily coming out because the forests are no longer denser than past due to expansion of the near cities like Junagadh and Amreli so on. To over come issues of environmental damage there are another options for creating an artificial habitats for wildlife creatures in the another area. In order to conserve trees and environmental properties near country side, the governmnet should revised the rules for the construction such as developing artificial forest and plant trees. In conclusion, There are increasing in occupiers of home than before, so no new home construction is possible in cities. As population increases in cities then there will be requirments of building new homes in countryside only by balancing environmental properties in other ways.
Many
cities
are expanding from
countryside
by constructing
homes
and the
highrise
buildings
. There are no possibility to build
new
constraction
in the city, by protecting environment
near
countryside
. In my opinion, as the city become crowded, there is an expansion from outskirts for residential purpose.

Firstly
,
cities
become over populated due to young
people
are migrating to
cities
from villages for vast career opportunities. As there are increasing
people
who want to
purchase
home,
but
there are
only
old
buildings
which are possible to renovate in
cities
. The reason behind these, there are no more wide open space
especially
for
construction
although there are space for airports, parks, and grounds for the sport activities. Such as in Rajkot there is no
new
construction
possible in the area like
Gundawad
and
Laxminagar
;
but
,
new
building
are available
near
another area like the
Sadhuvasavani
road and the
New
150ft
ring road.

Secondly
,
Countryside
there are land of the
forest
and the
farmes
which need to
cutdown
for the
building
purpose.
In addition
, it affects an environment and a wildlife in
many
aspects such as, the Lions in the
Gir
forest
are
easily
coming out
because
the
forests
are no longer denser than past due to expansion of the
near
cities
like
Junagadh
and
Amreli
so
on. To over
come
issues of environmental damage there are another options for creating an artificial
habitats
for wildlife creatures in the another area. In order to conserve trees and environmental properties
near
country side, the
governmnet
should
revised
the
rules
for the
construction
such as developing artificial
forest
and plant trees.

In conclusion
, There are increasing in occupiers of home than
before
,
so
no
new
home
construction
is possible in
cities
.
As
population increases in
cities
then there will be
requirments
of
building
new
homes
in
countryside
only
by balancing environmental properties in other ways.
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IELTS essay In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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