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In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. mpNK

Ways are the most significant object for the individuals to moving on the traffic. However, despite spending money for trains should be very useful way to improve them, l believe that money will allocate to each of side. Firstly, in this period there are many type of transport s in the worldwide such as train, car, plan and other. So the authority ought to spend money for the damaged way for the transports that they could easily drive around the traffic. Otherwise, these ways should not repaired in time, there would be many crashes between the transports so that the government should distinguish the transports which is useful and comfortable for the humans.

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