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In many countries women and men are working full time it is therefore logical for women and men to share household work. To what extent do tou agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays Technology advancement is at boomed pace. Every one tries to fullfill their all professional life expenditures and desired things. women and men are spending full time on jobs or work place. It help them to shares house-hold and livea valuable lifestyle. I firmly believe that it is a perfect decision for both genders to spend whole time at jobs and work place. Flostly, In lots of nation both men and women are working in this era. It will Help them to overcome the increasing amount of daily usable product. morever, it help them to live desired dream lifestyle easly. For instance a research shows that a single handed men and women can enjoy life by 40 Percent in spite of both working men and women were live more fancy. To Next everywhere the cost of education, helthcareand all other are increasing very highly. If there are both working genders then it will help them to ease their activities. For example, Due to the inflation in trade the prices are rise up and a single person can not handle it. As a result both men and women are working it aid them financially. On the otherhand, If they both are working full time, In that case they have less time to use quality time with partner or their children or kids as well. Such as a parents are working from morning 8 to evening 5. Hence there are lower time for their kids. To conclude with A single income welcomes the poverty in family where as a double revenue brings happiness towards family.
Nowadays Technology advancement is at boomed pace. Every one tries to
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fullfill
their all professional life expenditures and desired things.
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women
and
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men
are spending full
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time
on jobs or work place. It
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help
them to shares
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house
-hold and
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livea
valuable lifestyle. I
firmly
believe that it is a perfect decision for both genders to spend whole
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time
at jobs and work place.

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Flostly
, In
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both
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men
and
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women
are
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working
in this era. It will
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Help
them to overcome the increasing amount of daily usable product.
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morever
, it
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help
them to
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live
desired dream lifestyle
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easly
.
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a research
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shows
that a
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single handed
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men
and
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women
can enjoy life by 40

Percent
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in spite of
both
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working
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men
and
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women
were
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live
more fancy.

To
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everywhere the cost of education,
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helthcareand
all other are increasing
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genders then it will
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help
them to
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ease
their activities.
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, Due to the inflation in trade the prices are rise up and a single person can not handle it.
As a result
both
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men
and
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women
are
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working
it aid them
financially
.

On the
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otherhand
, If they both are
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working
full
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time
,
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they have less
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time
to
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use
quality
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time
with partner or their children or kids
as well
. Such as
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a parents
are
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working
from morning 8 to evening 5.
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Hence
there are lower
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time
for their kids.

To conclude
with A single income welcomes the poverty in family
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where as
a double revenue brings happiness towards family.
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IELTS essay In many countries women and men are working full time it is therefore logical for women and men to share household work.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
263 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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