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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

As mentioned in the above line, there are many peoples that are not using newspaper for reading and not using TV for watching news. The main cause of this situation is Today's latest technologies, People are using mobile phones, laptops and pad's for there knowledge and watching news and newspaper reading, That is the main problem of society related for reading and news. First of all, we need a more research on this situation how we can handled these kinds of thing. In my opinion if we are added some interesting things and useful material in our newspapers and TV news. I think every individual person like this things and it impact on his knowledge and skills and also effect on our broadcasting company and in this way more people getting jobs and competition. If i added my self example in this critical situation I think it is a good time to convey your message to other people. When I was studying in O level class liked to read newspaper and watchin TV for news, But after times my interest was gone due to this there was no entertainments, interesting factor in our news. Consequently, I bought a cell phone and loved to watch and read news on it. But another interesting store begun in my life, When I was graduating in my bachelor degree. I read newspapers and watch Tv news on daily bases because i was searching a job. so this is the main solution to promote our media. We need to think what our community wants, and doing effort to gave those things in our modern generation.
As mentioned in the above line, there are
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many
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peoples
that are not using
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newspaper
for reading and not using TV for watching
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news
. The main cause of this situation is
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Today
's latest technologies,
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People
are using mobile phones, laptops and pad's for there knowledge and watching
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news
and
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newspaper
reading,
That is
the main problem of society related for reading and news.

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First of all
, we need a more research on this situation how we can
The modal verb ‘can’ requires the verb’s base form.
handled
these kinds of thing. In my opinion if we are
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added
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some
interesting things and useful material in our
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newspapers
and TV
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news
. I
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think
every individual person like
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this
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things and
it
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impact
on his knowledge and
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skills
and
also
effect on our broadcasting
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company
and in this way more
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people
getting jobs and competition.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
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i
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added
my self example in this critical situation I
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think
it is a
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good
time to convey your message to other
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people
. When I was studying in O level
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class
liked to read
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newspaper
and
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watchin
TV for
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news
,
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But
after times my interest
was gone
due to this
Did you mean “there were no entertainments”?
there was no entertainments
, interesting factor in our
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news
.
Consequently
, I
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bought
a cell phone and
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loved
to
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watch
and read
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news
on it.
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But
another interesting store begun in my life, When I was graduating in my bachelor degree. I read
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newspapers
and
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watch
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Tv
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news
on daily bases
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because
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.
i
was searching a job.
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so
this is the main solution to promote our media. We need to
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think
what our community wants, and doing effort to
The verb after “to” should be in the base form: “give”.
gave
those things in our modern generation.
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IELTS essay : In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
270 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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