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In many countries today, there are concerns about unhealthy lifestyles that people lead. What health issues are linked to modern lifestyles.

In many countries today, there are concerns about unhealthy lifestyles that people lead. What health issues are linked to modern lifestyles. bx6aP
In recent years, there are views about harmful lifestyles which numereous humans are following in vast number of agrestics. In addition, what type of health problems depend on contemporary lifestyles. In the following paragraph, I will clarify my ideas with some evidences. It Is evident that, variety of lifestyles are revolutionized day by day. Furthermore, some of them are not healthy. Although, they are detrimental, several individuals follow up this type of concepts. For instance, artificial elements are used to make ladies more beautiful. Moreover, this Is very pity situation especially for next generation. While some citizens prefer healthy and more profitable lifestyles, others tend to utilize unuseful factors for their life. From several humans opinion, this kind of lifestyles are more famous and gorgeous for them. In strict contrast, hovewer health Is very crucial elements in our life. Thus, we should not change it to some kind of lifestyles that redundant. Nevertheless, some humans do not realize it, they want to lead contemporary objects, accelerate to these are more harmful for their health. Even though this type of conditions of life are numereous, citizens can reduce them with several ways. Such as, they should insist on producers to put shows that related to healthy and unhealthy circumstances and also about some advice on tv or this type of objects. Because almost everybody are interested in news. Therefore it can infulience to individuals. Hence, detrimental lifestyles will possible to solve, if humans become eager to solve them perfectly. Actually, everything in this world really depend on people themselves. If bodies look after their next off-spring, without doubtly, they prefer healthy activities. Despite of updated objects, clever humans can stay their own cultural and more beneficial lifestylie. Last, but no least, this kind of things are also related to humans' behaviour and characteristics. To put in a nutshel, I Pen down saying that many soultions are available for this kind of harmful lifestyles that came from other nations. One of them Is to avoid citizens about them with different ways.
In recent years, there are views about harmful
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lifestyles
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numereous
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humans
are following in vast number of
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agrestics
.
In addition
, what
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type
of health problems depend on contemporary
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lifestyles
.
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the following paragraph, I will clarify my
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ideas
with
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some
evidences.

It Is evident that, variety of
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lifestyles
are revolutionized
day by day.
Furthermore
,
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some
of them are not
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healthy
. Although, they are detrimental, several individuals follow up this
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type
of concepts.
For instance
, artificial elements are
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used
to
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make
ladies more
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beautiful
.
Moreover
, this Is
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very
pity situation
especially
for
next
generation. While
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some
citizens prefer
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healthy
and more profitable
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lifestyles
, others tend to utilize unuseful factors for their life. From several
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humans
opinion, this
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kind
of
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lifestyles
are more
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famous
and gorgeous for them.

In strict contrast,
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hovewer
health Is
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very
crucial elements in our life.
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, we should not
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change
it to
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some
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kind
of
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lifestyles
that redundant.
Nevertheless
,
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some
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humans
do not realize it, they want to lead contemporary objects, accelerate to these are more harmful for their health.
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this
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type
of conditions of life are
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numereous
, citizens can
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reduce
them with several ways. Such as, they should insist on producers to put
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shows
that related to
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healthy
and unhealthy circumstances and
also
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some
advice on
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tv
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type
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almost everybody
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are
interested in news.
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infulience
to individuals.

Hence
, detrimental
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lifestyles
will possible to solve, if
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humans
become eager to solve them
perfectly
. Actually, everything in this world
really
depend on
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people
themselves. If bodies look after their
next
off-spring, without
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doubtly
, they prefer
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healthy
activities.
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updated objects, clever
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humans
can stay their
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own
cultural and more beneficial
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lifestylie
. Last,
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kind
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also
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behaviour
and characteristics.

To put in a
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, I Pen down saying that
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many
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soultions
are available for this
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kind
of harmful
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lifestyles
that came from other nations. One of them Is to avoid citizens about them with
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different
ways.
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IELTS essay In many countries today, there are concerns about unhealthy lifestyles that people lead. What health issues are linked to modern lifestyles.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
339 words
6.0
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