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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extend do you agree?

In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. Pxmj
People have different opinions about choosing proper schools for their children. Although, there are two options that single-sex schools and mixed schools, some people believe thatsingle-gender schools affects negatively future of students. I completly agree with the given statement, because I believe that studying in a single-sex school can have detrimental effects on the lives of students as they grow up. This assay will discuss the reasons for supporting the viewpoint with relevant examples inthe forthcaming paragraphs followed by reasoned conclusion. Firstly, one major drawback faced by the boys having studied in a single gender school is uneasiness, while communicating with the opposite gender. In other words, they feel shy and uncomfortable when they are asked to interact with the females bacause of lack of confidence. Due to this many males suffer from severe mental pressure when they attending university, and other students coming from a co-educational background have a better rapport with girls than they have. Therefore, learning in a single-sex school can have seriously affect a one’s personality when they enter adulthood. Another convincing argument for this single-gender schools cannot be mirror of genuine society. To put this simply, school life has a profound impact on how moral chracter of student is built. When person spends twelve years of education exclusively with the same sex, it is highly possible that the person will become insensitive to the needs of opposite gender. Morover, from the social perspective, the current crime rate is increasing due to lack of mutual understanding. The reason is tthe inability to work for the convenience of others by attending the single-gender schools from an early age. For example, many studies have shown that 70% of young generation in the single-sex schools more than themixed schools being rules breaking in the globe. Hence, if learning in a single-sex school will adversely affect their later life. In conclusion, studying in single-sex school can have distinct weakness on moral character building and personal life of students. In my opinion, co-educational schools are better for the long-rerm well-being of children.
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and mixed
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believe
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school
can have detrimental effects on the
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lives
of
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students
as they grow up. This assay will discuss the reasons for supporting the viewpoint with relevant examples
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inthe
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paragraphs followed by reasoned conclusion.

Firstly
, one major drawback faced by the boys having studied in a single gender
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school
is uneasiness, while communicating with the opposite gender.
In other words
, they feel shy and uncomfortable when they
are asked
to interact with the females
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bacause
of lack of confidence. Due to this
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many
males suffer from severe mental pressure when
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university, and other
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students
coming from a co-educational background have a better rapport with girls than they have.
Therefore
, learning in a single-sex
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school
can have
seriously
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affect
a one’s personality when they enter adulthood.

Another convincing argument for this single-gender
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schools
cannot be
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mirror
of genuine society. To put this
simply
,
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school
life has a profound impact on how moral
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chracter
of
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student
is built
. When person spends twelve years of education exclusively with the same sex, it is
highly
possible that the person will become insensitive to the needs of opposite gender.
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Morover
, from the social perspective, the
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current
crime rate is increasing due to lack of mutual understanding. The reason is
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tthe
inability to work for the convenience of others by attending the single-gender
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schools
from an early age.
For example
,
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many
studies have shown that 70% of young generation in the single-sex
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schools
more than
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themixed
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schools
being
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rules
breaking in the globe.
Hence
, if learning in a single-sex
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school
will
adversely
affect their later life.

In conclusion
, studying in single-sex
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school
can have distinct weakness on moral character building and personal life of
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students
. In my opinion, co-educational
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schools
are better for the
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long-rerm
well-being of children.
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IELTS essay In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life.

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341 words
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