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Heaving meal together is important. It is considered as a social activity.

Heaving meal together is important. It is considered as a social activity. jbRE1
Nowadays, having meal with family becoming very tough because of hectic schedule. It is considered as a social activity. According to my perspective, eat meal together is vital to masses in nation. This essay will discuss about strong bonding with family members and guuid to each other. Related ideas will be discussed in ensuing paragraphs. To initiate, family is quite important in everyone's life. Having meal together to create a strong bonding and boost confidence. All the members discuss about the whole day. In other words, what they did in the whole day, which activity they did. Moreover with family member spend leisure time is also important because parents know a few children do not share their thoughts but seating together have a great benefit for children do parents can enhance their ability how to share their feelings, emotions, ideas and so on. Apart from that, guidence is much important in child's life. Having food together gaurdian can guide their juvenile. They can discuss about upcoming future. Additionally, parents play a vital role in youths life so togy child can discuss about their carrer. To conclude, to seat together or meal together is very essential. According to my opinion, people should meal together because it enhance the confidence level, to create strong bonding, can discuss about career. So all these things are very important.
Nowadays, having
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tough
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because
of hectic schedule. It
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as a social activity. According to my perspective, eat
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meal
together is vital to masses in nation. This essay will
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discuss about strong
bonding with
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family
members and
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guuid
to each other. Related
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ideas
will
be discussed
in ensuing paragraphs.

To initiate,
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family
is quite
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important
in everyone's life. Having
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meal
together to create a strong bonding and boost confidence. All the members
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discuss about the
whole day.
In other words
, what they did in the whole day, which activity they did.
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with
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family
member spend leisure time is
also
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important
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because
parents know a few children do not share their thoughts
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but
seating together have a great benefit for children do parents can enhance their ability how to share their feelings, emotions,
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ideas
and
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on.

Apart from that,
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guidence
is much
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important
in child's life. Having food together
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gaurdian
can guide their juvenile. They can
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discuss about upcoming
future.
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child can
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discuss about their
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carrer
.

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, to seat together or
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meal
together is
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very
essential. According to my opinion,
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people
should
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meal
together
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because
it
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enhance
the confidence level, to create strong bonding, can
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discuss about career
.
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all these things are
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IELTS essay Heaving meal together is important. It is considered as a social activity.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
224 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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