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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? 7e03
In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? In recent Era, the number of felony are increasing day by day and it is a huge problem in a number of nations. There are lots of reasons responsible for it. But this essay will discuss a number of relevant things, why it is happened and what type of preclusion we apply for decrease this issue. First, In new updated generation does not believe in hard work means they do not try itself, they always find shortcuts for deal any problem or situation. For example some humankind are choose un-appreciate work for earning extra money like Kidnapping, Robbery etc. Second most important reason are working parents, they could not have a efficient time for their children,
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are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

In recent Era, the number of felony are increasing day by day and it is a huge problem in a number of nations. There are lots of reasons responsible for it.
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But
this essay will discuss a number of relevant things, why it
is happened
and what type of preclusion we apply for decrease this issue.

First
, In new updated generation does not believe in
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hard
work means they do not try itself, they always find shortcuts for deal any problem or situation.
For example
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some
humankind are
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choose
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un-appreciate
work for earning extra money like Kidnapping, Robbery etc. Second most
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important
reason are working parents, they could not have
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a
efficient time for their children,
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IELTS essay In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
142 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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