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In many countries, plastic shopping bgs are the main type of rubbish. They cause water pollution and land pollution, so they should be banned. To what extend do you agree? v.2

In many countries, plastic shopping bgs are the main type of rubbish. They cause water pollution and land pollution, so they should be banned. v. 2
It is thought in most countries, that using plastic bags for shopping should stop because it resulting to water and land pollution. I strongly agree that it should be banned because its affect the environment and cause pollution that people and ecosystem will be at risk. Rubbish cause by plastic bags will affect in our surroundings, keeping plastic materials for everyday living such as going to market and for buying items that are usually people using, aside from that like straws and other plastic items. Littering particularly, plastics are non biodegradable and it cannot be recycled and not be able to use for other productive purpose. Without proper sanitation and garbage disposal, plastic will blocked the drainage, resulted to flood during heavy rains. People throwing plastic in the sea will destroy the ocean and water species can eat the rubbish. Water pollutants affect the water sources, as a results, people may acquire diseases. Plastic bags should be totally banned. Most countries started to implement by not using it, instead people bringing ecobag or paper bag for shopping. They also started to bring a container if people whats to purchase wet goods in the market. Other restaurant and fast foods are not allowing to use straws for their drinks. In my conclusion, plastic bag should stop using in all countries, it has harmful effect to people and ecosystem, consequently, water and land pollution. Government started a plan to control this problem.
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in most countries, that using
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plastic
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bags
for shopping should
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stop
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because
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it resulting
to
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water
and land pollution. I
strongly
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agree
that it should
be banned
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because
its affect the environment and cause pollution that
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people
and ecosystem will be at
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risk
.

Rubbish cause by
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plastic
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bags
will affect in our surroundings, keeping
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plastic
materials for everyday living such as going to market and for buying items that are
usually
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people
using, aside from that like straws and other
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plastic
items. Littering
particularly
,
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plastics
are
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non biodegradable
and it cannot
be recycled
and not be able to
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use
for other productive purpose. Without proper sanitation and garbage disposal,
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plastic
will
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blocked
the drainage, resulted to flood during heavy rains.
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People
throwing
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plastic
in the sea will
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destroy
the ocean and
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water
species can eat the rubbish.
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Water
pollutants affect the
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water
sources, as
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a results
,
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people
may acquire diseases.

Plastic
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bags
should be
totally
banned. Most countries
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started
to implement by not using it,
instead
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people
bringing
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ecobag
or paper
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bag
for shopping. They
also
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started
to bring a container if
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people
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whats
to
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purchase
wet
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goods
in the market. Other restaurant and
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fast
foods are not allowing to
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use
straws for their drinks.

In my conclusion,
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plastic
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bag
should
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stop
using in all countries, it has harmful effect to
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people
and ecosystem,
consequently
,
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water
and land pollution.
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Government
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started
a plan to control this problem.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay In many countries, plastic shopping bgs are the main type of rubbish. They cause water pollution and land pollution, so they should be banned. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
240 words
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