It is commonly believed by some masses that the use of plastic polyethene ought to be prohibited as it is regarded the pollutant which pollute water and soil in many nations. I am in consummate accord that polythene bags should be strictly banned as it is non biodegradable substance.
To begin with, the use of plastic polythene is increasing at alarming rate in multiple countries as it is cheaper. And, after using it, people throw it as debris which further do not decompose by the biological action of microorganisms. In this way, the plastic particles would blend with soil and pollute the land. Moreover, some hazardous particles of plastic would enter in human body and animal body through food that is grown in soil and causes several health related problems such as cancer etcetera. also, if the soil would be enriched with the polluting particles of plastic than the crops would not get enough nutrients from soil for its proper growth and development.
Additionally, the water is also going to be polluted when some persons throw waste plastic pieces in ponds and rivers. Generally speaking, the plastic would not dissolve in water and hinder the growth of marine animals and plants. Therefore, if the animals like fish inhale oxygen from water than the plastic segments would go to their body and fishes will loss their life. To illustrate, the national flower ' lotus' in my home country is going to be extinct due to the presence to plastic wastage.
In conclusion, my opinion is that the use of plastic bags should be strictly banned which have negative consequences on human and animals species.
It is
commonly
believed by
some
masses that the
use
of
plastic
polyethene
ought to
be prohibited
as it
is regarded
the pollutant which pollute
water
and
soil
in
many
nations. I am in consummate accord that polythene bags should be
strictly
banned as it is
non biodegradable
substance.
To
begin
with, the
use
of
plastic
polythene is increasing at alarming rate in multiple countries as it is cheaper. And, after using it,
people
throw it as debris which
further
do not decompose by the biological action of microorganisms. In this way, the
plastic
particles would blend with
soil
and pollute the land.
Moreover
,
some
hazardous particles of
plastic
would enter in human body and
animal
body through food that
is grown
in
soil
and causes
several health
related problems such as cancer etcetera.
also
, if the
soil
would
be enriched
with the polluting particles of
plastic
than the crops would not
get
enough
nutrients from
soil
for its proper growth and development.
Additionally
, the
water
is
also
going to
be polluted
when
some
persons throw waste
plastic
pieces in ponds and rivers.
Generally
speaking, the
plastic
would not dissolve in
water
and hinder the growth of marine
animals
and plants.
Therefore
, if the
animals
like fish inhale oxygen from
water
than the
plastic
segments would go to their body and fishes will loss their life. To illustrate, the national flower '
lotus&
#039; in my home country is going to be extinct due to the presence to
plastic
wastage.
In conclusion
, my opinion is that the
use
of
plastic
bags should be
strictly
banned which have
negative
consequences on human and
animals
species.
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