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In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish. It should be banned. A/D?

In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish. It should be banned. A/D? BJwam
Not surprisingly, plastic shopping bags have become a serious rubbish problem in many parts of the world, in recent years. Accordingly it is suggested that plastic manufacturing should be prohibited, yet to the best of my knowledge, these bags are comfortable for people. Banning plastic bags below a specific thickness is a best strategy to prevent pollution of environment. These bags are so thin that they easily split and can not be recycled. As consequence, they are not properly disposed and stay in the local area for more than 500 years. This often results in to pollution of underground water when water falls on these bags and absorbs certain plastic material. Furthermore, sometimes homeless animals consume them and get sick. However, there are several reasons why I feel positive about plastic bags. Firstly, these products are easy use, so they can be very comfortable for most of people. Secondly, if the government bans plastic bags many companies producing bags will have to face bankrupt, as a result, will rise unemployment. Last, but not the least not all plastic bags are non-recyclable so they can be responsibly disposed and recycled. Governments should enforce regulations in these cases so that plastics are regularly recycled and do not stay in the ecosystem. If these are properly recycled, this will not only reduce the amount of plastic waste at dumping grounds but also reduce pollution of river and well as groundwater pollution. In conclusion, I believe that If plastic bags below a particular thickness are banned and those above it are recycled, this will result in an environmentally sustainable world while serving the daily needs of humanity.
Not
surprisingly
,
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plastic
shopping
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bags
have become a serious rubbish problem in
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many
parts of the world, in recent years.
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Accordingly
it
is suggested
that
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plastic
manufacturing should
be prohibited
,
yet
to the best of my knowledge, these
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bags
are comfortable for
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people
.

Banning
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plastic
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bags
below a specific thickness is
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a
best strategy to
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prevent
pollution of environment. These
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bags
are
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so
thin that they
easily
split and can not be
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recycled
. As consequence, they are not
properly
disposed and stay in the local area for more than 500 years. This
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often
results in to pollution of underground water when water falls on these
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bags
and absorbs certain
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plastic
material.
Furthermore
,
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sometimes
homeless animals consume them and
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get
sick.

However
, there are several reasons why I feel
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positive
about
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plastic
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bags
.
Firstly
, these products are easy
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use
,
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so
they can be
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very
comfortable for most of
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people
.
Secondly
, if the
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government
bans
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plastic
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bags
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many
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companies
producing
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bags
will
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have to
face bankrupt,
as a result
, will rise unemployment.

Last,
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not the least not all
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plastic
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bags
are non-recyclable
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so
they can be
responsibly
disposed and
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recycled
.
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Governments
should enforce regulations in these cases
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so
that
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plastics
are
regularly
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recycled
and do not stay in the ecosystem. If these are
properly
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recycled
, this will not
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only
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reduce
the amount of
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plastic
waste at dumping grounds
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but
also
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reduce
pollution of river and well as groundwater pollution.

In conclusion
, I believe that If
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plastic
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bags
below a particular thickness
are banned
and those above it are
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recycled
, this will result in an
environmentally
sustainable world while serving the daily needs of humanity.
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IELTS essay In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish. It should be banned. A/D?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
273 words
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