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In many countries, people of all ages are choosing to live either alone or with friends and their is no doubt that this is having an effect on the community that they live in.

In many countries, people of all ages are choosing to live either alone or with friends and their is no doubt that this is having an effect on the community that they live in. m8Pw8
Modern life means that many people live away from their homes either because they are studying or because their circumstances have changed, such as getting divorced. Also people often have to travel away from their hometown in order to get a job and if they are not married, this means they live alone or share with friends. So, whole town and cities are changing because of this. The negative effects of this are, firstly, on the environment as more houses and flats need to built and this is a drain on resources. At the same time, a social consequence is that people are living in isolation or if they fall out with their flat mates they can be in a difficult situation. These people became distant from their families and as often they just go to work and came home, they do not always participate in community life or help create a neighborhood where everyone knows each other. However, there are also positive effects of this way of living. Communities with a lot of single people shared houses trend to have a lot of young people. Many of these young people go out more so more shops and leisure activities develop in a town and they can have a vibrant social life. This can make for a very dynamic and innovative community. To conclude, the change in the way people are living is inevitable and in my view, the benefits for outweigh the disadvantages. Nevertheless, we will have to be careful that we do not produce communities with social problems caused by people feeling isolated.
Modern life means that
many
people
live
away from their homes either
because
they are studying or
because
their circumstances have
changed
, such as getting divorced.
Also
people
often
have to
travel away from their hometown in order to
get
a job and if they are not married, this means they
live
alone or share with friends.
So
, whole town and cities are changing
because of this
.

The
negative
effects of this are,
firstly
, on the environment as more
houses
and flats need to built and this is a drain on resources. At the same time, a social consequence is that
people
are living in isolation or if they fall out with their flat mates they can be in a difficult situation. These
people
became distant from their families and as
often
they
just
go to work and came home, they do not always participate in community life or
help
create a neighborhood where everyone knows each other.

However
, there are
also
positive
effects of this way of living. Communities with
a lot of
single
people
shared
houses
trend to have
a lot of
young
people
.
Many
of these young
people
go out more
so
more shops and leisure activities develop in a
town and
they can have a vibrant social life. This can
make
for a
very
dynamic and innovative community.

To conclude
, the
change
in the way
people
are living is inevitable and in my view, the benefits for outweigh the disadvantages.
Nevertheless
, we will
have to
be careful that we do not produce communities with social problems caused by
people
feeling isolated.
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IELTS essay In many countries, people of all ages are choosing to live either alone or with friends and their is no doubt that this is having an effect on the community that they live in.

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