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The Similarities and Differences between High school and University Education

The Similarities and Differences between High school and University Education G30VB
Education is very important for the development of the individual and society. There are different levels of education; the two that I will be comparing and contrasting are High School and College. When you compare them, they seem like dramatically different places, but they have some things in common. There are many reasons why high school seems like college. Both high school and college impart to students the knowledge they need in the future. Students both hard skills and soft skills. The wide range of subjects like mathematics, science, history, geography, literature, etc. allows us to learn basic knowledge. Besides, we also find new ways of thinking and the ability to self-manage and solve problems. Secondly, education will also open up better job opportunities for students. They will get a well-pay job and live a well-off and comfortable life. Furthermore, both high school and university also have various kinds of examinations to assess students’ abilities. High school has several tests such as multiple choice and the essay examination, just as the university has. These tests help teachers classify good students or bad students. Despite these similarities, nobody can deny there are some apparent differences between high school and university education. First of all, university students have more responsibilities than high school students. They have to be more independent and make decisions by themselves. For example, they have to manage their schedules and do assignments. In contrast, high school students just have to follow the rules and obey their teachers. Secondly, university students mix with more people from different places in the world. On the other hand, in high school, their classmates usually live in the same hometown. Thirsty, in high school, you spend on average 6 hours each day/30 hours a week in class, proceeding from one class to the next. The school year is 36 weeks long; with a short break in the summer. Meanwhile, in university, you spend 12 to 16 hours each week in class, usually with breaks in between. Times are not limited to daylight hours, many classes are offered in the evening. In conclusion, high school and university are very different but also similar in some aspects.
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important
for the development of the individual and society. There are
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different
levels of
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education
; the two that I will be comparing and contrasting are
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High
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School
and College. When you compare them, they seem like
dramatically
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different
places,
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but
they have
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some
things in common.

There are
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many
reasons why
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high
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school
seems like college. Both
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high
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school
and college impart to
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students
the knowledge they need in the future.
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Students
both
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hard
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skills
and soft
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skills
. The wide range of subjects like mathematics, science, history, geography, literature, etc.
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allows
us to learn basic knowledge.
Besides
, we
also
find new ways of thinking and the ability to self-manage and solve problems.
Secondly
,
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will
also
open up better job opportunities for
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students
. They will
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get
a well-pay job and
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live
a well-off and comfortable life.
Furthermore
, both
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high
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school
and
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university
also
have various kinds of examinations to assess
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students’
abilities.
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High
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school
has several
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tests
such as multiple choice and the essay examination,
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just
as the
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university
has. These
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tests
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help
teachers classify
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good
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students
or
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bad
students.

Despite these similarities, nobody can deny there are
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some
apparent differences between
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high
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school
and
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university
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education
.
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First of all
,
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university
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students
have more responsibilities than
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school
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students
. They
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have to
be more independent and
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make
decisions by themselves.
For example
, they
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have to
manage their schedules and do assignments.
In contrast
,
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high
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school
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students
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just
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have to
follow the
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rules
and obey their teachers.
Secondly
,
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university
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students
mix with more
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people
from
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different
places in the world.
On the other hand
, in
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high
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school
, their classmates
usually
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live
in the same hometown. Thirsty, in
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high
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school
, you spend on average 6
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hours
each day/30
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hours
a week in
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class
, proceeding from one
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class
to the
next
. The
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school
year is 36 weeks long; with a short break in the summer. Meanwhile, in
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university
, you spend 12 to 16
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hours
each week in
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class
,
usually
with breaks in between. Times are not limited to daylight
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hours
,
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many
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classes
are offered
in the evening.

In conclusion
,
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high
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and
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university
are
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different
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but
also
similar in
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some
aspects.
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IELTS essay The Similarities and Differences between High school and University Education

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
362 words
6.0
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