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In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?

In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this? MVdL
It is quite significant to recycle the waste product in an environment friendly manner, yet many countries fail to do the same. There are several reasons why people do not focus on recycling and proper steps should be taken to change such a scenario. First of all, most people do not understand the need and importance of recycling. They are ignorant of the process of recycling and are least bothered to know where and how their garbage is being disposed. Moreover, most people are so busy in their own lives that they do not have the time to act responsibly and take care of such things. To cap it all, in many countries even government does not try to bring an improvement so that the recycling can be done on a larger scale. In a recent survey; conducted by the Times magazine of India, it was observed that 8 out of 10 people do not really know about the significance of recycling. To combat the above problem, lots of steps can be taken. Government should try and create forums where people can be educated about the significance of recycling. A chapter related to this topic should be included in the school curriculum so that citizens become responsible at an early age. Government can also start some programmes so that the rubbish can be recycled at a larger scale and the environment is made clean. For example, The new Prime minister of India Mr Narendra Modi initialized a programme named “Swach Bharat Abhiyan”, which means clean India. This programme focuses on keeping the country clean and propagates the need of recycling the rubbish products. Now, various societies are setting up collection processes so that most of the waste products are recycled in an eco friendly manner. In conclusion, it can be said that with increasing population all over the world, waste management is an important process and every country should try to maximize the recycling of rubbish.
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yet
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many
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countries
fail to do the same. There are several reasons why
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people
do not focus on
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recycling
and proper steps should
be taken
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change
such a scenario.

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, most
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people
do not understand the need and importance of
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recycling
. They are ignorant of the process of
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recycling
and are least bothered to know where and how their garbage is
being disposed
.
Moreover
, most
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people
are
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so
busy in their
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own
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lives
that they do not have the time to act
responsibly
and take care of such things. To cap it all, in
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many
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countries
even
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government
does not try to bring an improvement
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so
that the
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recycling
can
be done
on a larger scale. In a recent survey; conducted by the Times magazine of India, it
was observed
that 8 out of 10
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people
do not
really
know about the significance of recycling.

To combat the above problem, lots of steps can
be taken
.
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Government
should
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try and
create forums where
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people
can
be educated
about the significance of
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recycling
. A chapter related to this topic should
be included
in the school curriculum
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so
that citizens become responsible at an early age.
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Government
can
also
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start
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some
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programmes
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so
that the rubbish can
be recycled
at a larger scale and the environment
is made
clean.
For example
, The new Prime minister of India Mr Narendra
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Modi
initialized a
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programme
named “
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Swach
Bharat
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Abhiyan
”, which means clean India. This
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programme
focuses on keeping the
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country
clean and propagates the need of
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recycling
the rubbish products.
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Now
, various societies are setting up collection processes
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so
that most of the waste products
are recycled
in an
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eco friendly
manner.

In conclusion
, it can
be said
that with increasing population all over the world, waste management is an
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important
process and every
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country
should try to maximize the
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recycling
of rubbish.
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IELTS essay In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?

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